Bio-hazard transformation

[PupLucky]

16- On the hunt / Alert 

 

Connor had woken up late the day after his Gym adventure remembering strange nightmares of humanoid creatures chasing him though a black oily swamp thick with fog, before they dragged him into that oily corruption. he had put it down to a cold or flu coming on he had the normal symptoms brain fog, his muscles had ached and he had sweat through his sheets but he had also been relentlessly horny for some reason, so he did what anyone would do in his situation … he had called in sick and spent the rest of his day flicking between being so horny he couldn’t take it playing with his hole and edging himself while he looked as hook up apps, to feeling shit about himself and ill, doom scrolling his socials trying to feel better. But he couldn’t focus because through it all his mind kept wondering to his hook up at the gym and each time his phone buzzed with a notification his heart would skip a beat hoping it was Gray only to be disappointed when it’s just some time waster just wanting pics.

 It was close to Dusk when he finally broke the cycle and crawled out of bed, not even bothering to shower and throwing on last night’s cloths that still smelled of sex and sweat before heading out into the world, he found himself walking to the gym as if pulled there by some strange instinct, walking throw the generic franchise space hoping almost needing to see Gray, to submit to him again but the disappointment of him not being there almost like a physical blow.

 He couldn’t understand what was happening to him as he walked into the cool night air sickness forgotten now just needing to find a fuck, any fuck he had never felt like this before it was like his skin was on fire needing to be touched to feel a dick in his hole. Pulling out his phone Connor quickly brought up a cruising app he barely used and looked for local locations, The ginger man scanned the local entries until a truck stop bathroom further into the factory district caught his eye less than 2 miles away and looked pretty active. He headed off into the night to find some dick to stop his cravings.

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The Creator moved though the night like a ghost following Gray’s sent trail it knew it had to be discreet, that soon it would be hunted if it wasn’t already, so it and its creations Nick and Nate took back alleys and off roads creeping nearer to their quarry.

 It took around forty minutes to catch up to the scents source. not to say this whole time had been spent hunting this quarry. The creators DNA demanded to be spread far and wide and a few opportunities to do so had wandered into there path.

 The first has been a homeless guy old, weathered and dishevelled searching a dumpster in a back ally. caught completely unaware of their presence he had not even time to shout in alarm as he was pulled from foul container and the three descended on him, cloths ripped off exposing his dirty pale skin. He would have protested at his only cloths being destroyed but he was already choking on Nates massive cock unable to say anything as the shadowy creature looming over him fucked his mouth while he struggled to breath the ally around them now pulsing with toxic green light. Nick held the old mans kicking legs while he licked and sucked their hardening dick, allowing the creator access to his hole. The initial thrust was brutal and took a moment for the old man to register what had happened, he tried to scream but quickly passed out from the onslaught of the jack hammer fuck the creator applied. a quick efficient depositing of toxic DNA it doubted much would come of this one but it still deserved to be perfected. The whole ordeal took only two minutes from initial surprise to flooding his intestines and mouth with toxic cum … they left him writhing in a pool of the corrupt black venom leaking from his destroyed ass.

 The second had been them stumbling across a young brunette Twink while they blew their customer an older man with a paunch and a bad blond toupee, in an abandoned buildings rear parking lot. The Twink was on his knees by the side of a car distracted by the dick in their mouth, the older mans head thrown back moaning eyes closed. They were easy to approach unnoticed, any sound they made masque by the man’s moaning and the faint music coming from the cars open door.

Within only a few short seconds were both pushed against the cars body, with corrupted cocks deep inside their holes. They had both screamed at the savage entry, but the Twink adapted to the change quickly, moaning and thrusting back into his own destruction, the creator and smiled as it unloaded a torrent of poison into the young man’s insides.  knowing he would take the DNA well sensing he was already carrying a lesser strain of its perfected corruption, it had no way of knowing what this would do but it knew it would be interesting. Both men were left slumped in the car change taking them as the pack moved away, the creator spared another look and a feral snarl of satisfaction back at the smaller man the transformation ripping through him much faster than any of his other creations.

 That had been fifteen minutes prior, the creator knew the young one would now be up and hunting, and by the end of the night it knew many more would be brought under its sway. It could sense them all around it few now but quickly multiplying, toxic beacons flickering into existence as their humanity burned away. It stopped focusing on the growing numbers of its species and looked across a large dirt lot full of motorbikes and trucks, at a young muscular man in gym gear who bore the scent of the one who had escaped from it. the Creator parsed the scent billowing from the overheated man and smiled as it smelled its own corruption wafting from the man weak so, so weak but there all the same.

Unaware he was being watched from the darkness Connor nervously walked into a squat brutalist building that reeked of stale piss, cum and sex.

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The data retrieval analyst gulped as he walking into the dark office of his superior clutching black tablet like it was a shield that could ward off the wraith man he had to see, who was currently leaning back in an expensive chair polished shoes on his desk, the only scant illumination in the room a faintly glowing monitor and the lit cigarette between his lips.

 he went to speak stuttering over his words as the shadowy man’s eye’s locked on to his “s..s..sir we have some concerning reports and… and alerts coming from um emergency services around the uh ..Gentech buildings area sir”

a long few seconds passed but felt to him like an eternity, as his superior draw on the cigarette making it the ember at the end glow dazzling bright in the dark room, before it dulled and was pulled away a cloud of smoke blowen into the crisp airconditioned room, a languid southern drawl dripped from their lips the normally warm tones somehow icy cold “what kind of lerts we talkin bout?”

The analyst turned the tablet around and pressed play, various clips of calls to police ambulance and fire service echoed in the quite room, talk of strange grey men or creatures attacking people and medical emergencies …. until a southern voice said “enough”

 “I was told that buildin were locked up good ‘n’ tight … so I hope you aint tellin me some of our experiments have gone a wonderin ”

“that would be the conclusion that I would come to sir but its um …worse than that …” the analyst fell silent at the look of rage facing him

“how much worse we talkin?”

“um first responders have gone missing sir and um so …there has also been a major incident at the local hospital involving an unknown pathogen”

The southern man let out a steam of curses as he stood and loomed over his polished glass desk  crushing his cigarette into it before pushing a hidden button for an intercom “Vince get me the damn board on the line we have an issue” he looked up at the analyst with steel cold eyes “you fur fucksake boy stop shaking an get me all that info now!, continue data gathering protocols 'n' try get me a perimeter of the affected area”

The analyst ran from the dark off as his boss continued to curse and shout behind him.

It was going to be a long night....

[Menbendovr]

Excellent new chapter!  I like where you are advancing this story and introducing for us the culprits responsible for creating this new bio weapon.  At least, that’s what it appears like to me.

[leatherpunk16]

Did you jump ahead a day in the story and then go back? The timeline has had us believe this was all occurring in the space of a single night. It's good that it's finally going somewhere, but the pacing is inconsistent. The Grey Ones are going to lose their prey completely if they keep stopping to spread their corruption. 

[Menbendovr]

31 minutes ago, leatherpunk16 said:

Did you jump ahead a day in the story and then go back? The timeline has had us believe this was all occurring in the space of a single night. It's good that it's finally going somewhere, but the pacing is inconsistent. The Grey Ones are going to lose their prey completely if they keep stopping to spread their corruption. 

I suggest you read the previous chapters again.  I perceive no inconsistent pacing.  To me, it is all clearly still the first night of the creatures escape from the bio-lab.  The setup we’ve been given about these creatures abilities makes it easy for them to spread their seed while pursuing Gray.  The author has mentioned the pheromone trail they can detect even while very faint.  I’m very confident that Gray will soon be a Grey.

[leatherpunk16]

15 minutes ago, Menbendovr said:

I suggest you read the previous chapters again.  I perceive no inconsistent pacing.  To me, it is all clearly still the first night of the creatures escape from the bio-lab.  The setup we’ve been given about these creatures abilities makes it easy for them to spread their seed while pursuing Gray.  The author has mentioned the pheromone trail they can detect even while very faint.  I’m very confident that Gray will soon be a Grey.

I guess we should all be a little less perceptive. LOL. 

We see Connor spend his day feeling strange and horny, and then he goes to a trucker stop at the end of that day. Yet from the creator's POV, it's the same day. I got it right.

I'm referring to how it starts to go somewhere, but then it fizzles out before coming back to life. Except that it's rushed every time, and I can't get a sense of who these characters really are sometimes. Recapping from a different POV with little added is not narrative progress. I guess mindless fucking is what us BZ pigs are into, but it lacks the same substance that got us hooked five years ago.

I agree that Gray will be a Grey, but wasn't he made out to be the protagonist from the get-go? Such an outcome feels anti-climactic, and doesn't leave anywhere to go with it except the impeding epidemic. Which I guess could be something, but there's a lot of unanswered questions and inconsistent monster abilities. 

Lucky, don't stop what you're doing, but I personally am a little starved for the meat of this story.

[Menbendovr]

Hmmm… again I’m not getting any inconsistent monster abilities, but I get your point on the Connor timeline though as rushed as it may be it still works in the timeline of one night.

As for Gray, I think of him as the protagonist too, and perhaps @PupLucky has a twist or two in store for us thinking one outcome will befall him when in the end we’ll be surprised by a different one.  We’ll just have to let @PupLucky tell us that in his own way.

I love the story and hope it goes into a lot more “meaty” issues too, but I’ll gladly take as many piggy sex scenes he wants to throw in as well.  I’m not gonna complain about that.  😉😀

Chapters 14 and 15 may have been fillers in story telling but I loved them because in the long wait we had for new chapters, I had several fantasy scenes play out in my head one of which was a jogging scene.  So when @PupLucky gave me that, I was thrilled and thinking we were clearly on the same wavelength.  I would have found it ironic and beyond hilarious had the author had the 23 year old stud jogger been listening to Toxic by Brittany Spears when assaulted from behind and impregnated by the Grey.

[PupLucky]

just to clear up time line issue, I did state in part 11 that Gray had returned home around dawn on the night he and his team entered the Gentech building and that 14 hours passed, night had fallen again allowing the creatures to escape under cover of darkness to hunt him.

I will be returning to Gray and his predicament, but I'm also trying to show the spread of the infection though the city, working to find the balance between meaty story but also giving the meaty dirty sex people log in here for.

This is something I do as a way to wind down from work stress so, I will try to keep releasing a new update each Tuesday for people enjoying it and I just want to say thanks for all he comments I do take them all on board 

wishing you all a positive day 😉

[Menbendovr]

5 minutes ago, PupLucky said:

just to clear up time line issue, I did state in part 11 that Gray had returned home around dawn on the night he and his team entered the Gentech building and that 14 hours passed, night had fallen again allowing the creatures to escape under cover of darkness to hunt him.

I will be returning to Gray and his predicament, but I'm also trying to show the spread of the infection though the city, working to find the balance between meaty story but also giving the meaty dirty sex people log in here for.

This is something I do as a way to wind down from work stress so, I will try to keep releasing a new update each Tuesday for people enjoying it and I just want to say thanks for all he comments I do take them all on board 

wishing you all a positive day 😉

That’s right.  Thanks for clarifying that we are into the second night of the escape.

I love your story and look forward to each new chapter you post here.

[XTF2020]

It's a very hot story - loving it!  Not sure I'd put up a struggle at all.

[leatherpunk16]

Apologies. With all the typos and stuff, it isn't surprising that I lost track of time. 

I kindly suggest using some form of tech to at least proofread it. In the age where spell check and stuff are readily available on almost any smart device, ignoring the feature muddles the story. I've been here from the start and even developed the Gentech chapters into a screenplay for a porno flick, and I've come back to the story several times in the three year gap because it was so good. Now it's just chaotic and missing what hooked us at the start. 

Gratitude that we are getting something new at this most recent installment.