onlyraw Posted June 7 Report Posted June 7 I admit it …. I too am a sucker for a Hallmark happy ending 2 1
barebackrnb Posted June 8 Report Posted June 8 Ending 2 is the one I prefer as it offers more chapters, if the author chooses. I can imagine Ross gets to 15 and grooms his new bf to be a gifter with the goal of both successfully gifting 30 chasers in total. Lots of pozzibities with this "ending!" Thanks for writing this story! 2
shinelover Posted June 8 Report Posted June 8 Since I write romance stories for a living, I've got to go with option #2. Though, there's nothing wrong with the first option, either. He got knocked up and that's the important part. 2
kitpig Posted June 8 Report Posted June 8 Either option is good, but I prefer option 2... and maybe both of them get in on the gifting game? 1
Talurim Posted June 8 Author Report Posted June 8 Wow! thank you for all the responses. I have written a few stories and always had the one ending, so thought I would provide options this time. I was not expecting such an amazing response from so many sexy men. Thanks for the encouragement guys!!!! 4
CRKLTHRWLF Posted June 8 Report Posted June 8 That was a great story and yeah, as a romantic, I'd go for option 2 as well. (And also hoping this opens up follow up stories as they both try to reach 15 each...) 1
randyrawman Posted June 8 Report Posted June 8 I loved this story and I agree, 2 is my pick. Breeding and romance...winning combo! 2
ErikRaw Posted June 8 Report Posted June 8 I was hoping for ending 1.5 where Ross drops the no-contact clause, and No.8 can remain in touch with his gifter. So I really like 2.0 and the happy ending. Great story, the breeding scenes were sexy!! Thank you for sharing that work with us @Talurim 2
PozBearWI Posted June 8 Report Posted June 8 I have to agree with @bluey02 on this, the ending should be #1. If they remeet a year later and become boyfriends for life; that would have been the long term outcome I would have enjoyed more. But, honestly, it was all and well done story, thanks @Talurim 2
Devianturge Posted June 9 Report Posted June 9 I do wish he hadn’t been pozzed so quickly and it turned into something ongoing that would lead to option 2. 1 1
cumhole1919 Posted June 9 Report Posted June 9 I'd go with ending #1, probably because I've seen so many guys who think they'll be together forever split up. But I would add an epilogue, where he hooks up with a guy a couple of years later and finds that the guy has a tattoo with the number 14 in the middle of it. 1
Knightfalconer Posted June 9 Report Posted June 9 On 6/7/2025 at 3:24 PM, Bluey02 said: No 1 is more realistic... I mean there were 7 others before this guy. I'm both a realist and romantic, but sometimes you just gotta stick to the rules. 😉 Quite true. Besides, No 8 now needs find his first victim and begin a tally of his own, whilst Ross will invariably shift his focus on ensnaring No 9. 1 1
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