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Actually, I had a slight fever of like 99.8 for a few days. I took my temperature a  few hours ago and it's 100.7. No shaking or chills. No extreme night sweats. I took some aspirin to try and break the fever.

Hell, you're not even close. My temp ran between 102 and 103 for several days; I alternatively thought I was on fire or freezing (I was in front of the gas fireplace, the thermostat set at 82, 2 comforters over me, and I was still freezing). Every muscle felt as if an elf was inside, pounding with a hammer, and I was delirious for a couple of days.

The story is damned twisTed... and I goT hard as a rock. Whew....!

Hey guys sorry for the delay. Still writing another chapter. Most of my free time is shrinking I've been "tied up" literally by a hot daddy or 3 if u get my "point."

Nothing like experience to add to the realism of the wriTing.

incredibly hoT and oh so TwisTed...

Fuckin' hoT...!!

exactly what i need.... a guy with a sling, a bunch of rigs, and some friends with large toxic dicks.

fuck....! i need a barber like ThaT.

fuck... like everyone else here, i could use a group of 5 like this.

so much for going to work the nexT day....

To Sam_puppy and Npguy: don't look a gift horse in the mouth.

None of us get paid to write this. We all have lives that can get busy or complex. (Often times, we have to do extensive field research for these stories...) Sometimes we write ourselves into a corner, and need to abandon the storyline. if you want a complete, edited and proofread story before all the chapters are posted, well, you will need to be very very very patient.

There are a lot of stories I wish would have continued, but for whatever reason, the author has moved on, either to other stories or other things. I am just thankful my favorite authors have shared a some of their fantasies and hope every day that they come back written something new to share. From my own perspective, complaining is the best way extinguish what little motivation I have to write after a long day.

Before you complain again, try writing one yourself.

For whatever it's worth (probably less than a cup of coffee at Starbucks), I totally agree. Anybody can write junk; it takes skill to write good fiction. Try pounding out 500 words describing a sex scene [ok, pun intended] and tell us how much time it took. And being slightly (or very) tweaked while doing it doesn't improve your skill in writing narrative or dialogue.

totally hoT… and totally worth waiting for.

the story has been simply greaT since the start, and this installment is even hotter….

insanely twisTed....!

insanely twisTed story -- and HOT!

i need a broTher-in-law like that....

I somehow missed this story when the first part was posted. But DAMN!, is this story hoT....

wonderfully perverTed.....

This beginning is absolutely spoT on: "Freedom. The last time I felt it was the last time I took meth.... Well, so maybe I wasn’t naked, more like decked out as the slut I am, the slut I become once I’ve shoved a load of crystal up my ass."

this story is just insanely awesome (and it's giving me plenTy of twisTed ideas for play).....

insanely hoT story....

this is a seriously twisTed story -- i love it.

"The best prey were the ones who thought that they were the true hunters, the apex predator, masters of all. With their perfect bodies and looks, every urge they had was satisfied by some worshiper who obeyed like a trained dog when given orders. Built by endless hours in the gym, they could pick any man they wanted out of the crowd and have their way with him. Nothing that entered their limited imaginations was denied them."

as soon as i read that, i knew this story was going to be great.

christ, this is a fuckin' hoT story.

this sTory has definite potential.... don't keep us on edge too long for the next chapter.

the waiT was most definitely worth it....

hoT, hoT, hoT....

Where was this "60 year old big black brute" when I was an 18 year old pizza delivery boy?

i had that same thought... this story is fuckin' hoT.