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My heart sank about a third of the way through this chapter... Every thread tied ( well with the exception of Joshua)... Hopefully there will be a final reprise. Well it goes without saying that I loved it !😀
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Perhaps Dexter will land a job in the Atlanta Office. Let's hope that if he has his wicked way with Alberto, he might win his heart...
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Glad to see that Carrington's ex didn't get his claws in to Charlie. A lot has happened in two weeks. Charlie's got his man, resigned from the Navy and looks all set for a new life in the US. Wonder how Conrad is going to react when he hears .... Loved it !
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When I read the first two paragraphs, I thought WTF.... What a sneaky twist ! A great way to introduce Carrington's parents. It was the perfect read at the end of another busy workday and a good diversion from a couple of domestic disasters. My heating packed up won't be repaired until the weekend and I also managed to flood my bathroom on Monday night that lead to water coming through the ceiling and causing a light in the kitchen to explode. I have a couple of portable heaters but this chapter was more than enough to leave me feeling warm and cosy 🙂 .
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We're always being told to think of ways to remain positive throughout the pandemic. I guess Jason has found something to keep himself occupied while on furlough. Perhaps he'll get a chance to experience some of the other coloured suits in Steve's collection :@)
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Well worth the wait. It sounds like Charlie is discovering real love for the first time. It makes me wonder if he really knew his true feelings all along and the relationship with Serena was one of convenience. I wonder if he ever harbored subconscious feelings for Joshua. Speaking of Joshua, looks like are we are starting to understand what was behind his controlling nature. Will we see him reformed?? Another beautifully crafted chapter.
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After a really shitty work day, I needed something to lift my spirits. I read it twice. I loved all the little details, such as the difference in the smell of the pillows. That was like a flashback for me the first time I traveled to the US. You tend to go into sensory overload after a long haul flight and it little details like this that make this story so tangible to a reader. I thought it was going to go pear shaped at Carrington's front door. I'm so glad it didn't. Charlie must be anxious about taking the "next step". Can't wait to read all the juicy details 🙂
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Loved it!!!! I felt like I was actually going to throw up with nerves myself as Charlie waited in the rain.
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I know you like to tie up all loose ends in a story but that one was a real surprise 🙂 I think there's still a bit of mileage in that story line. Can't wait to read more.
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I think we all know what the free tattoo is going to be :@)
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Lovin' this so far
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Great Opening Chapter!
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What a beautifully crafted chapter! Hasn't our boy Conrad blossomed in a few short months. He has shown his darker side with this introduction to B&D. I loved it !! In the back of my mind I have a nagging feeling of sadness, as I feel like this incredible tale is drawing closer to it's conclusion. It's so easy to fall for characters that have been so skillfully written that they've been fixed in my heart. I can take comfort, knowing there are a few little threads to this tale that need to be tied up 🙂 I have LOVED every word you have written.
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billy88666 replied to PupLucky's topic in Bug Chasing & Gift Giving FICTION
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With Serena out of the way here's hoping Charlie will resign from his Naval career and will go on a search for Carrington in Atlanta. I hope he won't be pissed that his twin had his man first 🙂
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Another intense chapter. Juan was damned if he did and damned if he didn't ask for a poz load. I wonder how many loads it will take until he converts :@)
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Nice twist.. Wouldn't like to get on the wrong side of Moham 🙂
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So good to see this story updated . Loved the last chapter.
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pozzed FLASH! (Ian's Fall)
billy88666 replied to Chilighetti's topic in Bug Chasing & Gift Giving FICTION
I struggled reading this 1st chapter and couldn't quite put my finger on it until I read your postscript. The set up wasn't a bad one but I just knew there was something off as I was reading it. I felt that it was written by a young or inexperienced writer. By inexperienced, I don't mean that your writing wasn't accomplished. They always say that a writer should write about what they know if they want to avoid it sounding contrived or stilted. It's difficult to write about something that you haven't experienced personally. It's the same for a man trying to write in detail about childbirth. It just didn't scan as believable for me. It was too wordy. Your attempt to "flesh out" the characters with the backstory about the mother was irrelevant to your prospective audience, as was a lot of the other detail. If you want to take a look at Losolent's writing here it may help. He is truly gifted when it comes to getting the perfect balance of detail and narrative. His characters are skillfully written and credible. I hope I haven't offended you as I don't mean to offer criticism without attempting to be constructive and I truly wish you well with the remainder of you story.- 9 replies
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So it looks like Simon has missed out again... We're all thinking Joshua is back but could this be Carrington that has chloroformed Charlie? It would certainly be a "Positive" way to ensure that he breaks up with the girlfriend?
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billy88666 replied to youngass's topic in Bug Chasing & Gift Giving FICTION
I'm interested in how this story will conclude. Will our defenseless victim have the last laugh? Perhaps a fever could give him added strength and in his delirium, he could have the opportunity to overpower his Master and get his revenge by raping him and filling his body with his infected sperm. If he was clever enough, he might be able to turn the tables on his Master by drawing some of his contaminated blood and injecting it into him. Maybe a bite into his Master's flesh and his saliva could be enough for him to exact his revenge. It would be interesting to hear his Master's back story. What were his reasons for doing what he did? Was he looking to create a new Super Virus? If he under pressure from the company he works for to produce such a virus or if he intended to develop it and then use it to as a terrorist weapon to make money? There could still be a lot of mileage in this incredible story. -
Oooh.. I really like your latest addition to the family. Carrington sounds like he could be the man who finally tames Simon. We know he has his Eagle tattoo but I'm hoping that he may have another crucial one... 🙂
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What an excellent piece of writing! Your words seemed to flow off the screen and form solid images in front of me as I read. I loved the sex scene between Simon and Jamal. It was feral... Your stories here, combined, could make a huge amount of money on Amazon as a book of short stories. Thank you again for sharing them .
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billy88666 replied to PupLucky's topic in Bug Chasing & Gift Giving FICTION
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I found this incredible story for the first time today. What an incredible read! I really hope that you continue it. My dick was straining in my jeans reading it Mate !
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