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bareall77

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  1. I don't get it. Why would someone edit your story? Was it a moderator that took out something he thought didn't belong? Usually they just move the story. Who was it and why? I'm sorry this happened. Your stories are very hot, entertaining, and have a nice flow. Part of me wants you to give whoever did it the finger and write more. Though I also understand your frustration. It just sucks you won't be writing anymore.
  2. Man...hot and well written story. I wonder why the author would just stop? He had such a good thing going! We know from the prologue that he ends up in Egypt with one of his brothers. We don't know which one. Allen is being torn apart by 5 big black Marines. The fact that the first Marine's cock was so big it wouldn't fit in his mouth causing the skin on the sides of his mouth to tear...now that's fucked up, but hot in a perverse way! So how do we get from the 5min contest to the massive beast in Egypt? Anyone else notice that all 3 of his brothers are not married? The only one who got married ended up in a divorce. And wasn't the brother who "caught Allen" nude with a black mask on and a raging hard cock? Finally, Antoine. What becomes of him?? Sadly, we may never know. Everyone, don't misinterpret my post as bitching that the author didn't finish a story. It's actually more curiosity as to what happens and disappointment that we might not ever find out.
  3. Hot start!!!
  4. How about both a dp AND a deep, rough fisting!!! Please continue!!
  5. That IS hot! I've been wondering the same thing about what the "mysterious white powder" is...hmm.
  6. Yeah he will...but with the way these guys are...he may be holding his prolapsed cunt in with one hand and limping along with a crutch with the other!
  7. Definitely one of the best, well written stories I've read on here. Hot scenes of fucking and a fun plot as a backdrop to keep things interesting. Thanks for sharing the adventures of Ben and Brandon!!!
  8. Nice job Scorpion! Jason's a cumdump...but he's Scorpion's cumdump...I'm thinking this will be a great match!!!
  9. Hi, my question is about the number of views my profile has. The number has been stuck at 729 for weeks. Although I know I have had new visitors and likes since then. While I am not a number whore, it would be nice to see that number change if indeed I have had new and additional "views."
  10. Hot details on Michael's brutal fucking. His cherry didn't just pop...it exploded! Hope you continue so we get to see more of the former virgin's wrecked cunt!
  11. Fuck yeah! If only Jason knew how lucky he was. Wait, he soon will when he's having night sweats and body aches!!
  12. Absolutely! Also would like to explore more of the Scorpion's past. Will it continue to haunt him or drive him to keep stinging. Is this what's going to happen to Jason?
  13. Fuck! That was hot! A blood stained hand, a prolapsed cunt, and two loads of AIDS cum. All this while, I assume, he is seroconverting. And the night just started...
  14. I agree! It's like the midseason finale or season finale of a fav show of mine..."The Walking Dead," for example. Can't wait to find out what happens next!!
  15. Very hot and realistic story. I like the back and forth narrative knowing what both conflicted-Matt and his gifter, Trent, then Dan are thinking while Matt is converted to a poz, tina addicted cum n cock slut!! Nicely done!!
  16. Too bad this didn't continue. Great start that was sTarting to pick up! Nice job with the added pics!
  17. Me too! Keep going and nice cliffhanger ending!
  18. So they use him for 2 weeks, he is seroconverting. They wreck his boicunt beyond repair. But now that it's leaking green discharge...(someone enlighten me...is that ghonoria?) these two guys are done already? Part of me says assholes! The other sick, twisted, nasty side of me says FUCK bring on the group of fucked up bastards!
  19. Well done...I feel like one of the audience members watching the action! Grabbing my own cock as they had theirs. While I didn't get to participate in the bukkake, I imagined it. Which is good enough for me!
  20. Awe...the end? I want to hear more about the 3 fists and tag team gangbangs! Well, hot story dude...if it is the end...one hell of a job writing!!
  21. Me too! This is really getting hotter as we go further along!!
  22. Yes! Definitely continue!
  23. Yes!! Hot...great details about the destruction of his cunt!! Keep going!!
  24. Just when we think there couldn't possibly be more surprises...you throw in another twist! Hot!!
  25. This is his "ticket to financial freedom?" Everything he wants as long as he does anything his two owners want? Sign me up! Move aside so I can get in THAT sling!
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