bareall77
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Very hot story continues! I love the Halloween party and costumes they wore! Huge roleplay fan and love the spandex...and body paint these super heroes wore!
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Holy fuck. You weren't kidding or exaggerating when you said this was going to take a dark turn. And down the rabbit hole we go. My first thought was fear that Jeremy was going to meet a worse fate then he did this night. Then I was fascinated at the contrast between the first and second parts. Vinnie and Jeremy in a truly erotic situation...to the horror in the "shoot." Knowing that there are more unsavory characters involved here, I wonder what the aftermath of this will be. One development has to be that Vinnie maybe has somewhat of a heart. This was no longer business. A human being was involved. Not merchandise or "the bitch" but a young man who apparently woke up the human side of Vinnie. If only for a moment. Good chapter however strange the events took us along with the characters. Finally, the "interlude," which probably stole the show so to speak. Ironically, seeing as how many of us can be who we want to be on the Internet, I'm not sure what to believe. Except that this story and it's characters are so well written in their detail and plot. So I'm inclined to believe that at least some of what you wrote is true. Even if only part of your true tale is real, what an incredible story. ***I never write this much commentary on a story. Ever. Yet what you have here is so compelling that I have to. The story is well-deserving. Though it's what's behind this "fictional piece" that cement it as a work of art, however mind bending it may be.
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Uh oh...Darker!? Looks like that rabbit hole I was talking about might be pretty deep! Knowing a number things in this story actually happened...and probably STILL HAPPEN...only adds to the credibility and descriptions you bring to your characters. Keep up the good writing dude!
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Do courses on how to cruise successfully exist?
bareall77 replied to shyguyuk's topic in General Discussion
This is very good advice. My question is if, for the most part, "online hookup sites suck" (and I'm not agreeing or disagreeing with you) is there a better alternative? I honestly wish hooking in 2017 was like I heard it was in the late 70's - early 80's...in parks, bookstores, bathhouses, theaters, etc. Then, along with the online hookup sites, it would be like going through a catalog. "Hmm, looks like tonight is college night at Stickys. But it's fucking hot out...I know Used Holes Park will be busy!" Then I could contact friends and fuck buds from the hookup sites to find out what they are doing. -
Very hot chapter! This story is so fascinating because, as the reader, we get to really "feel" what it's like when JT, Joey, and David go through the very intense highs of bliss and pain. I was looking up at that mirror as David was. I was seeing and feeling what it was like to be so spun that I'm separated, yet connected to my body as David was. As the crimson/purple liquid is pumped into my veins I saw and felt it disperse to my brain, heart, lungs, and groin as David felt. That's not easy to do when writing...well anything. Also, one doesn't really know just how far Mr. X got inside. Was he up to his armpit? Or was the magic potion clouding what David was seeing (and feeling) and really was just above Mr. X's wrist that made the first fist David took so intense? My fellow readers, intense is putting it mildly. One other thing. I find it very interesting that certain "real-life" events are sprinkled in the narrative here and there. Not only does it help place the actions and developments in time, but makes me wonder just how far down the rabbit hole this will go. Both in this highly erotic and twisted tale...and in real life.
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Well worth the wait. Please continue! This is fucking hot! Placebos? Oh, I want Jon to rim me;)
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Outstanding follow up! Great to see these brothers progressing into what their masters want...and really what Austin and Ryan have wanted! Also, there's a nice little twist going here. Not sure if this is intentional or if others will pick up on it. HOT HOT HOT!
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Holy fuck was it ever! With each needle my thought was, "what's he going to do now!?" This story is not for everyone. But I will say, @asslikker, your creation and attention to detail make each graphic sex scene as intense mentally as it is physically. Easily one of the best I've read! How many times will I be saying that!?
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I love how Connor explains the "Olympic logo" to Zach with a loving laugh. Oh and their sex scenes are hot! Erotic, dirty, sleazy, spontaneous, and expanding. My favorite line? "Connor called it remaking my pussy." Fucking hot!
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'Do You Want Me to Stop?'
bareall77 replied to 1981virginia's topic in Bug Chasing & Gift Giving FICTION
This back and forth would be fucking hot and exciting if I were in that position! Damn...I'd nod, grunt yes, beg, plead, and whatever else came up! After all, he only would "charge" £50 plus extras! Fuck it...give me the extras! ☣- 12 replies
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'Do You Want Me to Stop?'
bareall77 replied to 1981virginia's topic in Bug Chasing & Gift Giving FICTION
In my opinion, you are a very talented writer and one of the best on here. So @1981virginia, I'm very happy to see you cumming out with a new poz tale!- 12 replies
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Holy FUCK!!!! EXTREMELY INTENSE! 6in prolapse! And that's just the start! GREAT chapter!
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Hot continuation!!!!!! "Do it, cum in my ass." Love his desire for cock and cum inside of him!
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And "drill players"?
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This is me. Rather, this is what I desire! It explains so much. I fucking love this story! By far one of the most well written stories on this site. Very descriptive in terms of the environment, atmosphere, and what the characters are going through and thinking. It's as though we're experiencing what is going on with them!
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That's a very good thing. Especially in this case!
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I love how our main character is now admitting that he wants hiv/AIDS to others like the therapist. Plus, he is turning into a cum slut. You're having him visit a doc and then a hospice is a nice set up for wanting Chris to fuck and shoot his AIDS load INSIDE his hole! Oh the hospice....so many possibilities with that one...including the therapist admitting to wanting it. VERY HOT!
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Fuck dude...wish we could see the vid! Interesting prospective - making the TOP the bitch for the DOM BOTTOMS that milk his cock. They own his "straight" jock cock. Their pussys own his cock! Love it...you don't hear about this often.
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Fuck! THIS WAS double the length of the "edited version" that came out. It was very real...at one point one of the tops said, "squeez (your hole) on that dick." The bottom, practically crying, goes "I caaaan't, there's no...I can't!" I have no idea why this was taken down. If anyone does have a link to the extended version-over 20min long, please share. It puts most vids I've seen similar to this (including the edited version) to shame.
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So has he finished movies yet or is it still in the works?
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Cody's Raw Sex Adventures
bareall77 replied to versbbguy's topic in Bug Chasing & Gift Giving FICTION
Very well said...and I completely agree. This Cody series has it all. It really hits all the right spots! ("Kevin is HIV+" is good as well) Versbbguy, you are one hell of a storyteller! -
This was one hell of a good story! So matter of fact. So erotic. So wrong...but oh so right! Both brothers admitting they have wanted this! Being guided by 2 masters. The build up with each step, every thrust, every drop of precum. This is a hot fucking story...a surprising gem at that! Great job!
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Way too fucking "wrong, but feels so right." This is one good story! Hot! Keep it going!!!
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Connor sounds amazing! Damn that was hot!
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XTube link collection - breeding videos
bareall77 replied to bbfan74's topic in Bareback Porn Discussion
Omg! Thank you JAYINSD for posting this! I had not seen part 2 until now. Fucking hot...all of it! Some of my favorite amateur clips! Quite a number of Xtube, tumblr stars in that. I don't recognize the blond guy with the mask wanting to be pozzed. Anyone who know who that is?
