A Brother in Trouble

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Part 63 - Confrontation

The alarm went off and the coach laid there in bed.   All he really wanted to do sleep the rest of the day and recover from the nine hard breedings he took the day before.  Instead, he got up and slowly walked to the shower.   He stood there letting the water rush over him and then took the soap and cleaned himself off.  He got dressed and then packed his bag up and took it to the van.  His legs and ass were sore, he was sure that anyone looking at him could tell he had been fucked all night.  He walked back into the breakfast area and the team was already there.

“Hey coach!” Shane said.    The team all had grins on their faces and the coach was sure they knew he had had a rough night.  “Hi, guys. Ready for the last day of camp?” he asked.

“Yeah.   This was a lot of fun” Marty said.

“I hope you learned a lot too.  We need to be really competitive the rest of the season to make it to finals” the coach said as he shifted his position to find one that hurt less.

“You ok coach?  You look like you’re in pain” Ethan asked.

“I’ll be ok.  I just slept funny” the coach replied, getting up and then heading over to get a quick breakfast.  The team all snickered and gestured on the positions they thought he was in while “sleeping.”   The coach came back and they all finished breakfast.  The coach tossed Shane the keys to the van and said “Get everyone’s luggage in the van and bring me the room keys.”   Shane and Ethan handed over the room keys and the team headed to the parking lot.  The coach went to the front desk and Dakota was standing behind the desk.

“Hello, Dakota.  We’re checking out” the coach said as he pushed the keys across the desk.

“I hope you enjoyed your stay, Coach Adams.  I know I did”  Dakota said with a smile.  “Feel free to stop back any time, no reservation is needed for that hot ass of yours.  We give free booster shots, too.”   The coach nervously looked around to see if anyone could have heard the last part and was relieved that no one was nearby.  “Uh, sure” the coach replied.   The coach started towards the front door and saw Ric walking towards the front desk.  “Leaving in a couple minutes, Ric” he yelled out.

“Thanks, coach.  I’ll meet you over at the University.  I’m meeting a friend first.” Ric replied.  The coach shook his head.  If it had been one of his team, he wouldn’t let him skip out of part of the camp, but since Ric wasn’t a swimmer, he just let it go.  “Be sure to be over there by 4PM” the coach told Ric.  The team headed over to the athletic center and Ric poked his head into Dennis’s office.

“Hey Dennis, how’s it going?” RIc asked.

“Doing good.  I hope you guys had fun while you were here” Dennis replied.

“Oh yeah.  A lot different than the last time, but still a lot of fun.  With any luck the room may have gotten another convert or two” Ric said with a devilish grin.

“Yeah, it gets a lot of action and hopefully you guys were successful”  Dennis said before he motioned for Ric to come closer.   “Keep this between you and me, but you should keep an eye out on your coach.  He may need some help in a few weeks.”

Ric’s eyes got big “You tagged him?” Ric asked.

“Yeah, my boyfriend, Dave, Dakota, Tony, Luis, Juan, Tyler, Carl and I all fucked him” Dennis said.

“Dave?  The escort? As in Joe?” asked Ric.

“Oh, you know?  Cool.  Yeah, that Dave, er.. Joe” Dennis said.

“Wow, you really did a job on him with that many guys.  Does he know about you guys being poz?”  Ric asked.

Dennis replied “Yeah, Joe told him and he seemed to get off on it.  We’ll see how enthusiastic he is when the flu hits.”

“Now his comment when I ran into him in the sauna makes some sense.  He saw my biohazard tat and asked if someone sent me in there.  I bet he thought I was sent to breed him” Ric said.

“Hehe, yeah.  It doesn’t mean you couldn’t once you’re back home” Dennis said.

“Fuck no!  I don’t want to end up on the news as another student that fucked his teacher.  It would screw both of our lives up.   Maybe after I graduate, but even then I don’t know” Ric answered.

“He’s got a great ass, but yeah, I get it.  So you guys head back today?” asked Dennis.

“Yeah.  This is the last day of camp.  The team already left.  First, I’m going over to get pierced by Daryl and then meet them at the University before going home” replied Ric.

Dennis smiled and asked “Cool.  What are you getting done?”

“I want to get my nipples done and then a ladder on my cock” answered Ric.

“Wow, that’s a lot in one day” Dennis replied.

“Yeah, but its kind of hard to get up here.  Do you know what bus I need to take to get over to Daryl and Thad’s shop?” asked Ric.

“Don’t worry about the bus.  I can take you over in the shuttle.  Just let me know when” Dennis said.

“Thanks, I really appreciate it” Ric said.  Dennis dropped Ric off at the tattoo shop telling him to call when he was done and he would take him over to the university.  Ric walked up to the door and pulled.  It was locked but after a few knocks, Daryl came up and let him in.  Dennis drove off and Ric went inside the shop.

“So, nips and a ladder?  You’re going to be one sore puppy” Daryl said with a smile.  Ric picked out a pair of barbell’s for his nipple piercings and they went into the back room.  Ric pulled his shirt off, sat down in the chair and leaned back.  He felt the adrenaline start to pump through his body and then there was the rush of endorphins as the needle poked through.   “Fuuuucck!” Ric yelled out while still trying to hold still.  “One down, five to go” Daryl said with a grin.   He moved over and pierced the second nipple, with Ric yelling out like before.

“Rest there for ten minutes and then we’ll work on the ladder” said Daryl as he got up and put the needles in the used bin and went to get the stuff for the other piercings.  Daryl laid everything out and then said “Ok, now take your shorts and underwear off.”   Ric did and Daryl smiled as he saw the hung cock between Ric’s legs. Ric sat back down and Daryl asked “Is that what its like soft?”

“Nah, its a little hard now” answered Ric.

“OK, get it hard so I know what size and where to put it” Daryl said.  Ric stroked his cock and once it was hard Daryl rolled his eyes and said  “I forgot how big it gets.  Just a sec, I need to find some longer bars.”  Daryl rummaged through the container of straight and slightly curved barbell piercings and then muttered “Shit.”  He got up and went to the front of the shop and Ric could hear him pulling out case after case.  Ric sat there with his cock rock hard and wasn’t sure what to do so he kept stroking it to keep it stiff.  Daryl came back into the room and said “Sorry, bud.  I don’t have anything that’s the right size.  Most guys aren’t as thick as you are, and the ones I have would be too short and pretty painful.  Let me measure exactly what I need and then I’ll do it when they come in.   I know this sucks for you since you can’t get up hear that easy, but I want to do it right.”

Ric looked up at Daryl, the disappointment clearly showed on his face.  “Damn.  Ok.  I understand” Ric said getting up out of the chair.  He put on his clothes and they walked back to the front of the shop.  He paid for the nipple piercings and gave Daryl his number to call when the right piercings came in.  Ric called Dennis back and told him he was done getting pierced and a few minutes later the van showed up.   Ric hopped in and Dakota was driving.   “Heading over to the athletic center?” Dakota asked.  “Yeah, gotta meet up for my ride home” Ric replied.   

There was a long silence as they drove through the streets until Dakota said “Your coach is a great fuck.  He took everything I could give him.   You think he’s really neg?  I mean, not for much longer, but now?   He took some pretty potent seed.”   Ric squirmed in his seat, feeling a little uncomfortable talking about the coach getting bred.

“I dunno.  I’m not even on the team, I just tagged along to have some fun with the guys and I haven’t fucked the coach” Ric replied.   

“Ah, gotcha.  Dennis said you were in the club, so I assumed you had tagged him too.  I saw you fuck the one coaches in the sauna.  That was pretty hot.  Too bad you got interrupted by those guys.  You should have fucked the bottom guy and left him a surprise present” Dakota said.

“I was tempted, but I really just wanted to get out of there.  Besides, my balls were empty after I fucked the coach” Ric replied.   They pulled up to the center and Dakota turned to Ric.   “Here’s my number.  Whenever you’re up this way I’d love to hookup some time.   You seem like a nice guy and Dennis said you are a great fuck.  Maybe we can swap strains”  Dakota told Ric.   “Thanks, that sounds like fun” Ric replied as he squeezed Dakota’s leg.

Ric hopped out of the van and walked into the building and went to find his usual spot.  He saw someone sitting over there and as he got closer he realized it was Joe.  “Hey, what are you doing here?” he said as he got close.

Joe turned and said “Hey, Ric.  Well, I got a message from Marcus to meet you and him here.   I’ve been waiting an hour.  I saw him over with the rest of the swimmers but he hasn’t come over.”

“Oh shit.  This isn’t good.  He showed up at the hotel yesterday and then ran out when he saw my biohazard tat and figured out we were poz.  I guess you didn’t warn him” Ric said.

“Fuck.  No, I didn’t.  I don’t think he knows I’m poz either.  This might get ugly.  I’ll take the heat, don’t worry” Joe said seriously.  A whistle blew and that session was over.  Joe saw Marcus walking their way.   “I’m gonna take us to the wrestling room.  No one else needs to hear this” Joe said as he got up and pointed towards the doors.  Ric and Joe started walking to them and Marcus changed his direction there too.   Joe and Ric got to the doors and walked to the wrestling room.  They went in and then kept walking to the second room.  “No one can hear us in there even if he yells” Joe said.   Once inside, Joe stopped and turned around, waiting for Marcus to come in.  The door flew open and Marcus came towards Joe and they could tell he was pissed.

“What the FUCK do you think you’re doing?   Setting me up with a poz dude?  Are you fuckin’ nuts?” Marcus said as he walked up to Joe.  He jabbed his finger into Joe’s chest with each of the last four words.

“Marcus, you seemed to like him and he liked you.  I just thought I’d let you know where to find each other and that there was mutual interest.  We haven’t fucked in a while.  I don’t know what you’re into or not any more.   Shit, you’re both adults and you know you have to have these conversations if you’re gonna fuck… thats if you actually care if a guy is neg or poz” Joe said back in a stern voice.

“What?  You think I’d fuck with poz guys?   This guy’s still in high school.  Why would I think he’s poz?” Marcus asked back.

“You don’t think guys in high school fuck raw?  I know I did.  I never used a condom until I got to college.  And I know we never used one when I fucked you all those times.  Who knows how many poz guys you’ve been with and didn’t even know it” Joe countered.

Marcus was stunned.  “I… uh… I’m careful about who I fuck with” Marcus finally said.

“Doesn’t sound like it to me.  Ric said you never asked and only stopped when you saw his biohazard tat” Joe replied.

“But I told you, I never expect a guy that age to be poz” Marcus said.

Joe could tell the intensity was easing from Marcus’s argument.  “That doesn’t mean shit.   Old, young, smooth, hairy, athletic or obese.  Anyone can be poz and with most guys you can’t tell.   Are you on prep?” Joe asked.

“What? No.  Why would I be.  I told you, I’m careful” said Marcus.

“Would you have let the other guy in my room fuck you raw?” Ric asked before Joe could say anything.

“Sure.  He’s cute and had nice cock, but he seemed more interested in getting fucked” Marcus replied, not expecting to get questioned from both guys.

“Then you would have take a big toxic load.  He just converted a month ago.  He’s not on drugs and is really potent.  He loves getting his dick in neg holes too” Ric said.  Marcus’s jaw dropped and he backed up a step and was clearly panicked.

Joe laughed and said “Who knows, that pretty little ass of yours might already be knocked up.  You’ve always been a horny bottom.  You probably want it but are just afraid to admit it.  I’ve seen it a lot.  First guys stop asking if the tops are neg and then after they find out they've taken a few poz loads they get comfortable and start looking for the poz guys.”

“No, its nothing like that.  It just makes things awkward” Marcus said.

“That isn’t what guys that are intent on staying neg say.  You’re just playing russian roulette.  One day the bullet will end up in the chamber and you’re gonna be pozzed up like Ric and I are.  It might have already happened” Joe said with a chuckle.  Ric was grinning, since he thought he knew where Joe was taking the conversation.

“You?  You’re poz too?” Marcus asked incredulously.

“Yeah, I am” Joe said smiling back at Marcus.  “Why don’t you just admit that you want a good poz fuck.  You always liked my cock and I bet you’d love Ric’s cock too.  He may be young, but he’s hung and knows how to use it”

Ric moved behind Marcus and gently ran his hands over Marcus’s speedo covered ass.  He heard Marcus gasp and then his breathing became labored.  “No, thats crazy dude.  Why would I ever want to knowingly take a poz load?” Marcus asked.

“Once you’re poz, you never have to worry about some guy pozzing you again” Ric said softly in his ear as Ric’s hands continued to rub over his ass.   Joe moved closer and brushed his hands over Marcus’s chest, rubbing the hard, pierced nipples.

Joe could see Marcus fight with himself.  “I know you want it.   Just tell us and we can give you a fuck like no other.  You can choose who and how.  Just me, just Ric or both of us.  I could even set something up and get a group together, but Ric might not be able to make it and you really should experience his cock.   Just say yes, Marcus and we’ll take you over to the storage room and give you the fuck of your life”  Joe said.

Marcus was muttering to himself as he listened to Joe.  A large wet spot of precum had soaked through his speedo and his cock was getting harder. Ric thought he heard “oh fuck” over and over but since he was behind Marcus he couldn’t really hear it.   Joe saw a tear run down Marcus’s cheek and then he said “I want to but I shouldn’t.  Oh god, what do I do?”

“Let fate decide for you.  That’s what I did” Ric said.

“What?” Marcus said, confused more than ever.

“I took the loads and let fate decide if I got pozzed.  My life has been so much better since then” Ric said.

“oh fuck, oh god” Marcus said and then was breathing heavy.  Joe and Ric let Marcus stew with the thoughts and finally Marcus said “Give me your poz cocks.”

Joe's grin got more intense and he led Ric and Marcus over to the storage room.   The three went inside and Ric locked the door.  Ric moved in behind Marcus and started to kiss the back of his neck and put his hands inside Marcus’s speedo and pulled them down.   Joe pulled off his t-shirt and dropped his shorts to the floor.  A tug and his jockstrap was laying on top of his shorts.  Joe moved closer and kissed Marcus deeply.  He could feel Marcus’s cock get stiffer between them and rubbed his body against the leaking shaft.  Ric was the only one with clothes on, so he pulled away and shucked his clothes onto the floor too.  Getting closer, he got down on his knees and pried the firm ass apart.

Ric inhaled deeply, smelling the sweat and scent from Marcus as well as the chlorine from the pool.  He licked along the crack and and felt Marcus shiver.  Joe licked and kissed down Marcus’s front and took his stiff cock into his mouth.   Joe sucked and licked, trying to get Marcus to a stage of lust that he would never want to come down from until his ass was full of Ric and Joe’s cum.  He could hear Ric doing his best on Marcus’s pussy and knew they had to be intense but not take Marcus over the edge.  When Marcus started to squirm he knew that it was time.

Joe pulled off and pulled Marcus down to his knees.  Ric sat down on the rolled wrestling mat as Joe directed him to.    Joe turned Marcus so that he was in between Ric’s legs and then moved in behind Marcus, like he had done dozens of times before and slicked his cock up with spit.  Marcus started to lick Ric’s hard cock and braced himself on Ric’s legs.   Joe pushed the piercing into the throbbing pucker and added more spit.  Pressing in harder he could feel Marcus start to tense up.   Joe gave him a few strokes with his hands along his back and Ric’s hands were caressing his his head which was enough to relax Marcus and Joe pressed in harder.

A few more rubs of his hand and Joe felt the hole open up enough and he gave a nudge, letting the rest of his cock head pop past Marcus’s outer ring.  When Joe had fucked Marcus in the past, Marcus was always eager to get all of his cock inside him.  This time Joe was going slower and figured once he got a good rhythm going Marcus would become the usual cock hungry slut.  Joe started to rock his hips, pushing deeper in each time.   Marcus was energetically sucking Ric’s cock and Joe’s strokes got longer.    Soon he was fucking Marcus just like the old days.   He pushed all the way in and then got up on his feet, pushing Ric’s cock deep into Marcus’s throat.

With Joe now in a better position, he began to pound Marcus’s hole.  He could feel the ring tug and pull as he jabbed it into the tender walls of Marcus’s rectum.  Joe was hammering away at Marcus’s ass and was amazed that Marcus was still sucking Ric’s thick shaft.  Ric had his eyes closed and was enjoying the oral workover from Marcus.  Joe knew he wasn’t going to last much longer, but wanted to make sure he got Marcus’s chute opened up and prepped for Ric’s larger cock.  He pulled out and plunged back in a few times but that just intensified the tightness in his balls.  Joe grabbed Marcus’s shoulders and drove his cock in deep.  The pulses from his cock were intense and he could feel the cum shoot out and cover the walls of Marcus’s tunnel.  Joe grunted as each wave of toxic seed pumped into the swimmer.

Marcus had stopped sucking when he felt Joe start to breed his hole.  It was too late now, Joe’s poz cum was now inside him, possibly infecting him.   Marcus was expecting it to feel different, but it felt just like all the other times Joe had cum inside him.  It was a feeling that he loved - the warmth and wetness of another man’s cum deep inside him.  He let out a loud moan that surprised not only Ric and Joe, but himself.    His heart was racing, knowing that he had just done something that he had been avoiding since he took his first cock.  Joe left his cock inside Marcus for a minute after the shots of cum ended.  He slowly pulled out and left the gaping, cum filled hole empty.

Ric realized it was his turn and gently pulled his cock from Marcus’s mouth and slid over before quickly moving behind Marcus.  He saw some of Joe’s cum dripping out of the battered hole and smiled as he lined his cock up.  He pushed in and Marcus’s hole was tight.  The coating of spit and Joe’s cum didn’t seem to be enough to let his cock just slide in.   He waited until Joe was in place in front of Marcus and Marcus had started to lick the still hard shaft clean.  With a little more pressure, his cock descended deeper into Marcus’s hole.  He could hear the groans but kept pushing further.  When he hit the inner ring he looked down and still had over an inch left to go.  Ric grabbed Marcus’s hips and thrust in, plowing in the rest of the way.  He heard a muffled scream so he stood there motionless for half a minute.  When Marcus seemed to recover, he pulled back and heard another muffled groan.

Ric started to rock back and forth slowly, letting Marcus get used to his sizable shaft.  Just like he had done the first time fucking most of the guys, he let Marcus get used to it and then fucked faster or longer.  Marcus seemed to adapt quicker than many guys and he thought it might be one of the few times that Marcus would know how it felt to be fucked by his own cock.  Their length and thickness seemed to be similar from the short time that he saw it before Joe began fucking Marcus.  Ric soon had a good pace going, long firm strokes felt good inside the experienced hole.   Marcus even started to squeeze down on his cock occasionally.   

A tingle or two from his balls told Ric he was nearing the point of no return.   He fucked harder and looked at Joe who was watching Ric pound Marcus’s ass.  Joe grinned and nodded to Ric as he sensed Ric was getting close.  Joe held Marcus’s head down on his cock as Ric pushed in all the way. Ric let out a growl as his cock pumped shot after shot of charged cum into Marcus’s wrecked cunt. After the first few spurts, Joe let go of Marcus’s head and let him gasp for air while Ric flooded his ass.  Ric left his cock inside Marcus while his body recovered from the orgasm.  Ric pulled out and sat down on the floor against the rolled mat.  Marcus then backed away from Joe and laid down on the floor on his back, breathing heavily. “Oh my god that was wild” Marcus said.

Joe got a wicked smile on his face and leaned forward and crawled between Marcus’s legs.  “What are you doing, Joe?” Marcus asked.

“I just want to feel what that hole feels like after Ric stretched you out” Joe replied.  Before Marcus could say anything, Joe lifted his legs up and slid his hard cock right into the loose, cummy hole.  Joe started to drill Marcus again, this time feeling Ric’s and his cum mixed together coating his cock.  Marcus moaned as Joe fucked him.  He tried in vain to clamp his hole down around Joe’s cock and just laid back and let Joe pound his pussy.  “Damn, you’re loose now” Joe said.

“Think he can take us both?” Ric asked.  A look of fear came over Marcus’s face as Joe said “We can try.”   Joe hooked his arms under Marcus’s arms and then leaned back until Marcus was now riding him.   Ric pushed Marcus over so he was laying on Joe’s chest and he straddled Joe.   He pressed his cock against Joe’s shaft and then up to Marcus’s hole.    He shoved in and got nowhere.  He then pulled his foreskin back and pushed slowly and felt his cock head catch on the battered hole.   Pushing harder he heard Marcus whimper and then it stretched enough for him to start sliding in.  Joe held Marcus still as Ric’s shaft pushed along Joe’s.  Ric felt Joe’s piercing drag along the bottom of his cock as he gave Marcus the last few inches.

Marcus was fully impaled on both cocks and had never felt so full in his life.  Ric started to move back and forth with his hips and while the strokes were only a few inches long it was enough to send shockwaves through all three of them.   He kept it up for a few minutes and then felt Joe’s cock start to pulse against his own.   Another dose of Joe’s viral cum pumped into Marcus’s ass and the feeling caused Ric to shoot another load in too.  Marcus whimpered and yelled out “Oh fuck!” as he felt the third and fourth poz loads fill his tortured hole.   Deep down he knew this was probably it - his neg days were now numbered.   He was on an adrenaline high like never before with the risk making it so much more intense.

Ric pulled his cock out and Marcus stood up,  his shaky legs barely holding him vertical.  Ric put his clothes on and helped Marcus get his speedo back on.   Helping Joe off the floor, Ric watched him put his clothes back on.   They walked slowly out of the wrestling rooms and towards the pool.  As they got closer to the pool, Marcus went over to where all the swimmers were.  Joe and Ric went back over to the other side.   Joe gave Ric a hug and told him to keep in touch and let him know where he decided to go to college and then headed out the door.   He stared at Joe's ass walking away from him until the door closed.   The final whistle blew and the camp was over.  The teams showered and packed and Ric dragged the equipment duffles back to the van.  Everyone hopped in for the drive home.  They pulled into the school parking lot and as Ric was unloading all of the bags the coach walked up to him.

“Ric, I’d like you to stop by my office some time this week.  I think you’re the only one at school that can help me with a few things I need to know. This is just between you and me.  OK?” Coach Adams said.

 

“Sure thing coach” Ric replied.

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Another great chapter ?

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Ric and Joe  are so experienced  and know just how to entice and deliver  as Marcus   says  "Oh fuck, oh god” Marcus said and then was breathing heavy.  Joe and Ric let Marcus stew with the thoughts and finally Marcus said “Give me your poz cocks.”Great writing as usual !!!!!'?????

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Chi4loads,

Superb writing! I really enjoy reading your stories! Two thumbs and my hard daddy cock UP!

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Part 64 - Return Call

 

Steven was scrambling to get ready for work.  He and Ryan had been fucking since they got back from their 2PM classes and his ass was full of charged cum.  Ryan had just dumped load number three in his ass when he noticed the time and realized they were going to be late for work.  Standing in the shower, he pushed it out and watched it run towards the drain, the water helping it along.   He hated to do it, but with that much cum he knew it would want to escape at the least opportune time while he was working.   They dressed and both walked over to the restaurant.   Once again the manager asked Steven to wait tables.   It seemed that he was getting asked to do it more and more so he felt that they had confidence in him and hopefully he would be doing it all the time soon.

As he took the order from table 12, his phone buzzed.   He knew he had to be careful when looking at messages while at work.  So when he finally had a spare minute he ducked into the storage room and read it.

“Are you available tonight after work?”

He looked at the contact and it was from Mr. Snyder.  He hadn’t heard anything from him since the first meeting a week and a half earlier.  Steven’s heart started beating faster.  He kind of had hoped that he wouldn’t hear from Mr. Snyder ever again, but he did like the money he got.  Several thoughts went through his mind - was the one fuck enough to infect him?  It was probably too soon but he could be.  Did he want to meet so he could accuse him of pozzing him up?  A man that rich could crush Steven and leave him broke and homeless on possibly in jail for the rest of his life.   He showed the message to Ryan who told him he was being too dramatic and just go turn the trick and enjoy the extra cash.

During the next lull Steven was back in the storage room and typed out a reply - “yes.  meet out front again?”  A few minutes later he got a simple reply - “Yes.  10:15”  He finished his shift and he once again tried to clean up a bit in the bathroom before meeting Ryan out in back of the restaurant.   Ryan kissed him and said “Have fun!”  They walked along the side of the building and when they got to the street Steven spotted the SUV.  Ryan turned left and headed back to his dorm room and Steven walked over to the truck.  The driver opened the back door for him and he got in and was on his way to Mr. Snyder’s mansion.  Steven was even more nervous than the first time he went.  He felt guilty for not telling Mr. Snyder he was poz and quite infectious if the last test results he got from Tyler were to be believed.  He tempered that guilt with the knowledge that Mr. Snyder was well educated and yet never questioned Steven about his status and willingly got fucked raw by him.

They pulled up to the huge mansion and the driver opened the door.  This time he went to the front door by himself.  Before he could knock, the front door opened and there stood a guy with a bow tie and a black jockstrap and nothing more.  He was about Steven’s age and height, slightly more muscular, dark close cropped hair but that was the extent of any hair he could find.  The guy said “Welcome Steven.  Our master awaits you” as he ushered him inside.   Steven got a knot in his gut.  He wasn’t anyone’s slave, sub or boy, unless someone was referring to Ryan, and even then that was not how their relationship worked.

He followed the guy and passed the doors to the room he was in before.  The guy opened another door and then descended down the steps to a lower level.  They walked down a hallway and then the guy opened yet another door.  He stood to the side and motioned that Steven should go inside.  Steven walked in and saw a large sex room.   It was like the one that Joe and Kyle used to have in the bedroom he now used, but much larger.  He saw Mr. Snyder laying on a padded bench, his stomach on the leather and each wrist and ankle locked to the thick wood legs.  As he walked towards him, he heard the door close behind him and the guy quickly walked past him until he was standing next to Mr. Snyder.   Steven looked back and forth between the two and was unsure what to do.

“I’m glad you could come tonight, Steven” Mr. Snyder said.

“Yes, sir” Steven replied.

“I thought you might like to meet one of my boys.  I have a few on staff to keep me entertained.  They are all bottoms, since I usually prefer the top role.  It is only when I need to satisfy a different itch, that I bring in people such as yourself” Mr. Snyder said.  There was a pause and he continued “Obviously, I enjoyed our last encounter.  It was much more satisfying than the previous few.  It’s nice to find a younger man who knows how to properly use another man.  First, I want to watch you use Will, here.  He has earned the privilege of being fucked by someone besides me.  My cock has been the only one that has ever been inside him.  Please use the mat in front of me so I can see and enjoy him as you wish.”

Steven smiled and hoped that Will knew what he was getting into.  He slowly disrobed and replied to Mr. Snyder “Yes, sir.  Thank you.”  He stood there naked trying to figure out what to do to make sure that Mr. Snyder was pleased with his performance.  Thinking back on his fun with Ryan earlier, he was happy that he didn’t have a chance to blow his load during their fuck.    Steven stroked his cock and moved to the mat.  Will was already there, on his knees with his hands behind his back, awaiting Steven’s orders.   Steven approached and stood in front of Will.  He stood there for an extended period of time, waiting to see if Will would make a move to suck him before Steven told him what to do.   Will stood there and Steven could see how eager he was to either suck or get fucked, but stood his place.  Will licked his lips and Steven slapped his face firmly, but without much force.

“You will wait until you are told what to do” Steven said sternly.

Steven’s cock got harder by the second.  Mr. Snyder may be the master around this house, but he was going to be the best alpha.  Will had a look of shock in his face as he resumed his position and now expressionless face.  Steven grinned and only looked over at Mr. Snyder with his eyes.  He saw a slight grin and figured that he was doing a good job so far.  He moved closer and his rigid cock was only two inches from Will’s lips.  He stroked it a few times, pulling the foreskin back and watching a drop of precum form at the end of his cock.  He held it there, taunting Will with his hungry cock.

Will wasn’t going to move until told to do so.  He already found out that Steven was almost as demanding as his master.  His breathing got quicker, but he stayed in place even though he wanted to leap forward and swallow down the first non-white cock he had ever been this close to.  Steven moved an inch closer and he could see Will tense up.  He then leaned in and brushed his cock over Will’s lips, testing him a little more.  Satisfied that Will would obey and was eager, Steven put his hand on the back of Will’s head and then told him “Suck it, Will.”

Will opened his mouth and licked off the drop of precum, savoring Steven’s unique taste.  His lips brushed against Steven’s cock as he took more of it into his mouth, using his tongue to slather spit over it and stimulate it more.

Steven was slowly fucking Will’s head onto his cock, deeper and deeper each time.  His cock nudged into Will’s throat and he was pleasantly surprised at the lack of gag reflex.   He put his other hand on Will’s head and thrust in all the way.  Other than a warm, moist throat enveloping his cock, Will did not protest or struggle.  Instead, he massaged the end of his cock with throat muscles.   Steven held him there, enjoying the feeling until he felt the muscles seem to spasm.  He pulled Will’s head back and tilted it up towards his.  Will was quietly gasping for air, refilling his lungs.  Steven knew that Will was no stranger to this sort of treatment.   With no struggle until his body instinctively showed his limit, Steven knew that Will was trained to serve and trust his master.  Once he had replenished his oxygen supply, Steven pushed his cock back into Will’s waiting mouth.  He released his hands and let the boy prepare his cock for its eventual anal entry.

Will deepthroated Steven’s cock several times and pulled off after almost twenty minutes of oral stimulation.   He looked up briefly to Steven and saw first his smile and then his nod.   “Show me that ass” Steven said and Will turned around and presented his smooth butt.  Steven kneeled and pulled the two halves apart.  He spit on the hole and then pressed two fingers to the puckered ring.  He rubbed the spit around the hole and then pushed them in.  They sunk in easily and soon Steven knew why.  He pulled them out and saw the creamy coating.   He licked the tips and then fed his fingers to Will who eagerly sucked them clean.  He heard Mr. Snyder quietly chuckle and knew that he had prepped Will’s hole.   

Steven jabbed his face into the crack and pushed his tongue in before sucking out some of the cum inside Will’s cunt.  He could tell the move surprised Will, but he recovered quickly and braced himself for the next step.  There was no need for any more foreplay and Steven sat up and shoved his cock into the freshly bred pussy.  He drove in with one long, fast movement until his body slammed into Will’s.  There was only the slightest of grunts from the bottom but Steven could feel his body race to adapt to the bare cock that was now fully implanted inside it.  Before Will was completely ready, he pulled back and rammed in again feeling the quivering hole around his shaft.   Steven began a series of slow, hard thrusts which forced much of Mr. Snyder’s cum out of Will’s hole.

What was left was the bare minimum of lube coating Steven’s cock and the vulnerable walls of Will’s chute.  Steven knew that this was the right time to pound the hungry cunt and abuse it enough to make it receptive to the virus that was slowly seeping into his body from his precum.   He fucked hard and then harder still until he was pulling all the way out and then shoving back into the battered hole.   Steven looked over and saw Mr. Snyder watch him fuck his sub ruthlessly.  He didn’t have an expression of surprise or pleasure, but one of admiration.   Steven’s pace picked up and the tightness in his balls increased.   Holding on to Will’s hips, he slammed in several times, the last one bringing a flood of poz cum into the bottom’s well used hole.  Steven growled as the pulses added spurts of jizz into the throbbing cunt.

Steven pulled his cock out slowly, using his fingers to push any cum that tried to escape back into the confines of Will’s hole.  He shoved two fingers in and roughly twisted them around, gouging his fingernails into the soft flesh.   This last move caused the only real audible noises from Will.  It was louder than a whimper and almost a quiet scream.   One more twist and Steven pulled his fingers out and pressed them to Will’s lips.  Will licked them clean and then started to turn around before he stopped, realizing he had received no instructions to do so.   “That’s ok.  Turn around, Will.   Assume your sub position, facing your master” Steven said pointing to a spot to make sure he was off to the side so he could have a better view of the upcoming activities.

The grin on Steven’s face told Will and his master that he was thinking of something devious.   Steven stood and walked the few steps over to Mr. Snyder and pressed his cum covered cock to Mr. Snyder’s lips.  Trapped, Mr. Snyder started to object but Steven’s hands on the back of his head told him it was futile.  In seconds, his mouth opened and took the slime coated cock into his mouth.  Steven slowly fucked in and out, making the master become his cocksucker.   Steven heard Will gasp and assumed he had never seen his master forced into submission.  He only spent a few minutes making Mr. Snyder clean his cock of the cum mixture before pulling out and saying “Very good.”

Steven moved around to the back of Mr. Snyder and caressed the exposed butt.  He moved his hand so that it ran up and down the crack and then pushed his middle finger into the crack so it dragged along from the taint to the hole.  He pushed the dry finger into the hole and heard a moan from Mr. Snyder.  If anything, it felt even tighter than the last time.   Steven fucked and twisted his finger around until he could push a second finger in. He heard a pained groan as he screwed his fingers in harder.  Will stood to the side, keeping quiet but the expression on his face showed his shock.   Steven dripped a gob of spit onto his fingers and pushed them in and then added a third finger.

Steven gave one last twist and pulled his fingers out.  One step had him centered behind the millionaire’s ass, close but not touching.  He looked down and saw the pucker wink at him and he knew that Mr. Snyder was anticipating his penetration.  Steven dripped some spit and let it run down the crack, over the hole and down to the elder’s balls.   He drew it out, waiting longer and making both Will and Mr. Snyder wait for the inevitable plunge.  On their first meeting, Mr. Snyder was completely in control with what happened and when.  Steven was taking advantage of this new situation and was going to do things his way this time.   He reached down and circled the now quivering ring with his finger and pushed it in to the second knuckle and left it there.   He heard Mr. Snyder clear his throat, but other than that he stayed silent.  Will was craning his neck to try and see what was happening, but his master’s body blocked the view.

The hole pulsed around his finger and Steven smiled. He waited several seconds more and then pulled his finger free and jammed his dripping cock into Mr. Snyder’s pussy.   He was balls deep in only a second or two and heard a loud, pained grunt from his bottom.  Will looked shocked as he watched his master being violated like he was but did not move from his position.  Steven gave Mr. Snyder only a moment to get used to the cock in his tight cunt.  He started with long strokes, pulling back slowly until just the tip of his cock was inside and then shoved back in.   Each time was a little faster on the withdrawal until he had an even pace, fucking in and pulling back.  He started moving his hips around and each thrust dug in at a different angle.  He felt Mr. Snyder squirm on the bench and a quick slap of the lightly haired ass stopped that movement.   He heard a quiet gasp from Will and smiled back at him.   

Steven gave a half dozen quick and hard thrusts and then went back to slow pulls and firm shoves.  He could feel the hole getting slicker, no doubt from his precum and maybe some ass juice from Mr. Snyder.  He marveled at how stiff his cock had remained since he first entered Will until now.  He didn’t have a chance to take a vitamin V before the session, since he kept his small stash that Joe gave him at home.  He wondered if the first fuck was enough to infect Mr. Snyder or whether this was the one that would do it.   Of course with his more aggressive attitude this session, there might not be another meeting to fuck him again.  He wasn’t sure that Mr. Snyder liked having an aggressive top after the previous session where he had been a Dominant bottom and told Steven he wanted to be in control.

It didn’t matter.  Steven wanted to fuck his way and while he liked the money, if this was the last time then he didn’t care.   He started to fuck harder and grabbed Mr. Snyder’s hips to brace himself.  Their skin slapped together and his formerly swinging balls started to draw up closer to his cock.  He could feel the occasional spray of precum from Mr. Snyder’s swaying cock as he slammed into him.  Steven jammed in one more time as his cock swelled and began shooting it’s charged payload into the abused tunnel.

“Oh fuck yes, boy” Mr. Snyder exclaimed.

The pulses faded and Steven started to slowly fuck the now sloppy hole.  Something inside him wanted to keep fucking Mr. Snyder’s ass.  He thought partly it was to do a thorough job and partly because it felt so good to have a tight cum filled hole gripping his cock.  He knew he wouldn’t last very long and the third load of the night would be small but he fucked with determination.  He heard a few grunts from Mr. Snyder and could tell that he wasn’t used to being fucked for as long as Steven had.  He pounded for a few minutes more and then unleashed four last spurts of toxin into the battered hole.   He slowly removed his cock and looked around the playroom to see if he could find a plug.  Not seeing one he walked around Mr. Snyder and presented his dripping cock to Will.   

Will glanced over at his master and then back to the cock in front of him.   He licked the charged cum off the shaft and then cleaned off Steven’s bush and balls.   Steven patted him on his head and said “Good job, Will” before turning back to Mr. Snyder.   “Thank you sir.  I hope you enjoyed it.”

Mr. Snyder was not used to being the one on the bench and looked back at Steven.   “Yes, boy.  That was a lot more than I was expecting.  I may have misjudged your talents.  The driver will have your payment.  You may go now” Mr. Snyder said, still locked on the bench, sweating profusely and with labored breathing.  Steven assumed that Will would release him, just as he assumed he had locked him down before Steven’s arrival.  Steven had been careful to always face Will and Mr. Snyder so that they couldn’t see the brand, but he looked down at Will and walked right in front of him, the biohazard branded ass cheek just inches from his face.  He thought he heard a slight gasp but he wasn’t sure.  He took a towel from the table and wiped his cock off and put his clothes on.   

Steven showed himself out and heard the front door click shut behind him as he walked to the SUV.  The driver was waiting with an open door and Steven climbed in.  On the seat next to him was an envelope and he picked it up and held it for the ride back to the restaurant.  The driver stopped and got out, opening the door for Steven.  As Steven got out the driver said quietly “You must be good.  Few ever go back for a second visit, much less get a bonus.  Enjoy your night, sir.”

[pozpopperpig]

Another chapter that makes my cock hard and drool!

[studl1]

Hard fun poz cum

[chi4loads]

Part 65 - Giving Great Customer Service

 

“Aaron, I need to talk with you” the manager said as he walked in the back door of the car rental office.

“Sure, boss.  Is anything wrong?”  Aaron replied as he followed the manager into the office.

“There will be if I don’t show up on time for my wife’s birthday dinner.  I’m leaving you in charge tonight.   There are only a few reservations so there shouldn’t be any problems.   Harry is running the bus and Jack is the porter.  Think you can handle it?” the manager said, visibly anxious.

“Yeah, no problem.  Don’t worry about us and have a good time with your wife” Aaron said with a grin.

The manager rolled his eyes and passed a slip of paper to Aaron.  “This is my passcode if you need to override anything.  Don’t abuse it, okay?”

Aaron took it and slid it in his pocket and pulled a condom back out.  “Here, boss.  In case you get lucky” Aaron said as he put the packet on the boss’s desk and smiled.  The boss looked back at him with surprise but then slowly took the condom packet and put it in his own pants pocket.  As Aaron walked out of the office he said “I have lube too, if you need it.”  He worked part of his shift until the manager came up and said “OK, I’m taking off now.   If there are any emergencies, call me but it better be serious.”

“Don’t worry, boss.   By the way, when are they coming to fix the air conditioning?” Aaron asked.

“Tomorrow sometime, I hope.  See you then” the manager said as he walked out the door.   Aaron double checked the reservations and there were still only three.   One in a half hour and two in three hours.  He went over and clicked the fan up one notch hoping a little breeze would help the sweltering heat inside the small building.   The porter was in the hut at the gate with its own AC unit and Harry was in the bus which was nice and cool, but the main building was hot so he rolled his sleeves up his forearm half way.  The bottom of his biohazard tattoo showed, but he would roll them back down as soon as a customer arrived.  He read through messages on his phone, something he normally couldn’t do with the boss around.  The radio crackled and Harry reported he was on his way back to the office with one passenger.   He changed the fan to point towards the customers and took his place behind the desk just as the customer walked in the door.

“Good evening sir.  Welcome to A1 Car Rental.  My name is Aaron.  How can I help you tonight?”  Aaron said like the thousands of times he had said it before.  “I have a reservation for Cramer” the guy said as he  handed over his drivers license and credit card.   Aaron found the reservation and he was typing all the info in.  He could sense the guy looking at him but that was pretty normal.   While he had toned the hair down the past few months after several comments from Nick, the piercings and tattoos (which were visible through his thin white dress shirt) always seemed to get people to stare at him.  He liked the attention even if sometimes the looks told him they were not a fan. He handed the license and credit card back to the customer saying “Mr. Cramer, let me print out the paperwork and we’ll get you on your way.”  Rather than taking his credit card and license, the customer reached up and pushed Aaron’s sleeve up a few inches.

“Ah, that’s what I thought it was.  Very nice. I hope you earned it and its not just a decoration” Mr. Cramer said.

Aaron blushed and pulled his arm back a few inches.  “Thank you and yes, I earned it” Aaron said.   He completed the rest of the rental paperwork and Aaron grabbed the keys off the rack.   “You have a white Toyota in parking space B5.  Just show the paperwork and your license to the porter and he will let you out of the gate” Aaron said.

“I need to use the restroom first” Mr. Cramer said, winking at Aaron.

“Down the hall to your right” Aaron replied.  He watched the guy look back at him several times and he walked out from behind the desk and saw him standing at the bathroom door, looking back and waiting.   Aaron had had numerous customers hit on him since he started the job but no one had ever been this obvious to get him into the restroom.  He looked at his watch, grabbed the radio and asked Harry where he was and got “Waiting at Terminal 1” back.  He knew from there, it would be at least 20 minutes before Harry would be back.  Grabbing the radio, he walked down the hall and saw Mr. Cramer walk inside.

Aaron slowly opened the door and saw him standing at the urinal.  As the door clicked shut, Aaron locked the door, set the radio down on the sink and waited for Mr. Cramer to make the first move.   He hadn’t had sex in there since the time with Mark.   Mr. Cramer wasn’t nearly as good looking as Mark, but he seemed to want to play with the fire that was Aaron’s cum and that was one of the differences in the meetings.  Mr. Cramer was a tall, medium built guy in his 30’s.   His dark hair was thinning and there was a wedding ring on his left hand.   

“Uh, can we do this quick?” Mr. Cramer asked.

“Do what?” Aaron replied, a knowing grin on his face.

“You know, a quick fuck” was the response.

“Are you neg?” Aaron asked as he moved closer.

“Uh, yeah.  I think so” Mr. Cramer replied.

“I’m not and I only do it bare.  Is that a problem?” Aaron asked coyly.

“Hell no, that's what I’m looking for” said Mr. Cramer.

“What’s your wife going to say?” asked Aaron.

“Husband, actually, and he wants it too” Mr. Cramer said.

“Well, then.  Lets see if we can help you out.  Get those pants off and get over here on your knees” Aaron said, surprising himself at his commanding voice.

Mr. Cramer kicked his loafers off and dropped his pants and underwear into a pile on the floor.  He was on his knees and reaching for Aaron’s belt in seconds and had fished his hardening cock out in a few more.   He frantically started sucking Aaron’s cock and Aaron just stood there and let him go at it.  It turned out to be a very good blowjob, which surprised Aaron. In only a few minutes, he was rock hard and ready to find out if he took cock as good as he sucked it.  He pulled his cock out of Mr. Cramer’s mouth and helped him to his feet.   Pushing him over towards the sink, he remembered Mark doing the same to him months earlier and giving him his first poz load.

Mr. Cramer took the hint and braced himself on the sink.  Aaron kicked his feet wider and kneeled down.  He pried his ass apart and spit on the hole.  “That’s all the lube you get.  A rough fuck helps get you knocked up” Aaron said as he stood up.  He jabbed a finger in, digging his fingernail into the tender chute.   He did it a gain, with two fingers and then with three.   Each time Mr. Cramer yelled out “Fuck!”  Aaron ignored the expletives and the obvious pain Mr. Cramer was in and stabbed his fingers in a few more times.   Aaron stood and rubbed his dripping cock head around his hole and said “Last chance to change your mind.”

“Do it.  Charge me up” Mr. Cramer said.

Aaron rammed his cock inside and immediately felt Mr. Cramer’s body go limp.   “Oh my fucking god!” screamed Mr. Cramer as his body started to regain its strength.   Aaron waited a few more seconds and started to drive his cock in and out of the freshly tortured hole.   He used long strokes and would grind his hips as he pushed in.   He reached his arm around, leaving his forearm in front of Mr. Cramer’s mouth.  “Kiss it.  Kiss the symbol of what you want so bad” Aaron whispered in his ear.  The pounding continued on Mr. Cramer’s cunt and the sounds of slapping skin echoed in the bathroom. It went on and on and Mr. Cramer couldn’t believe that Aaron was fucking him for this long.  He hoped they wouldn’t get caught.   

Aaron was grunting as he started to get close to shooting his poison into his willing victim.   Suddenly he felt the hole start to spasm around his cock and Mr. Cramer let out a loud moan.   Spurt after spurt of cum shot out on to the floor from Mr. Cramer’s cock.  The orgasm forced Aaron’s own and he gripped Mr. Cramer’s body with both arms as his hips rolled a few more times before his cock began to pump its deadly semen into another victim.   Aaron thrust in a few last times and then slowly pulled his cock out of the ravaged pussy.   The cum covering his cock was a hue of pink and he knew Mr. Cramer would be feeling this fuck for a few days.

Aaron turned Mr. Cramer around and pushed him to his knees.  “Clean it” he commanded.   Mr. Cramer methodically licked up the shaft from the base along the bottom of Aaron’s cock then curling his tongue around the sides and lastly opened wide and deep throated his cock.  His lips were tight around the rod and slowly Mr. Cramer pulled back, sucking any remaining cum off the cock.  Mr. Cramer looked up at Aaron with a smile and Aaron tucked his cock back into his pants.   “I hope you’ll give us good ratings on the survey” Aaron said as he grabbed the radio, unlocked the door and walked back to the front desk.  He keyed the radio and said “Jack, we have a code 19. White Toyota.” “10-4 good buddy” replied Jack with a chuckle.

A minute later, Mr. Cramer came out of the restroom and grabbed his suitcase and went out the side door to the parking lot.  Aaron walked over and watched as he found the car, put the luggage inside and headed for the front gate.  Mr. Cramer stopped at the hut and Jack walked up to the car, taking his license and paperwork. Mr. Cramer looked back at Jack and saw a tall skinny black guy.  He had close cropped hair, a big smile, a little goatee on his chin and his fingers seemed to match the rest of his body - long and thin. He moved with grace and purpose, completely at ease with himself.   Jack looked over the documents and then walked around the car.   “Mr. Cramer.  We have an issue.  Can you come take a look at this?” Jack yelled out.

Mr. Cramer put the car in park and got out of the car.  He walked around the back and over to the passenger side of the car.  He saw Jack pointing at something but couldn’t tell what. “What?” Mr. Cramer asked.  He got closer and suddenly Jack pushed him against the car, facing the hut.  His hands were quickly placed on the roof of the car, spread out like he was going to be frisked.  Jack’s body was firmly against his back, holding him in place.

“I hear you’re looking for gifts.  We like to make sure we satisfy all our customer’s needs” Jack whispered in his ear while reaching around and unbuttoning Mr. Cramer’s pants.   “I love sloppy seconds too.  Aaron and I give different experiences.  He’s short and thick and I’m long and thin.  Can you take 12 inches?”

“Uh… I.. What?  Uh… I don’t know” Mr. Cramer stammered out.  He looked around and the area was deserted.  The parking lot lights on this side of the car were out so he stood in the shadows.  His pants were pulled down exposing his butt and there was a sizable pinkish wet spot on his white underwear.  Jack pushed his hard cock between the two mounds and after a few pokes found the source of the oozing cum.  Jack started to push and with the aid of the large cum load and the recently fucked hole, just slid his 12 inches of manmeat into Mr. Cramer’s wrecked hole.  He got most of the way in and hit the second ring and with a hard shove, drove his cock all the way in.  Mr. Cramer screamed out but only the birds and squirrels could hear him.

Jack’s chest was against Mr. Cramer’s back and he could feel the bottom breathing heavy from the invasion.  “Damn good there Mr. C.  It usually takes a three or four tries to bottom out in most of our special customers” he said.  His hips started rocking and the short strokes gave way to longer ones.  Mr. Cramer pushed his ass back and Jack really began his fuck.  With his hands on top of Mr. Cramer’s, holding him to the car, his body started pistoning almost the entire length of his cock.   Mr. Cramer was whimpering from the cock ramming in deep and then pulling almost out.  He had never experienced that much cock pumping in and out of him.  Not one of the thrusts of cock was gentle.  He felt Jack bounce off his ass as he bottomed out and then pulled back.   His ass was under assault and he wasn’t sure how much more he could take.

“Please… Breed me!” Mr. Cramer yelled out.

Jack didn’t need to be told again.   He jack rabbited the businessman’s ass, plowing in and out of the inner ring until his body started to shake and he shoved in, pinning Mr. Cramer to the side  of the car.   Waves of viral semen pumped into the helpless bottom.  Jack gave a few final thrusts after the last cum shot and stood there with their torsos fully connected for a minute.  Both were breathing heavy and as they returned to normal, Jack pulled his still stiff cock out of the puffy hole.   Jack pulled a paper towel from his pocket and wiped his cock off and zipped up.  Mr. Cramer stood there a few more moments and then pulled his pants up.  His legs were wobbly, but he made it back around the car and plopped down in the driver’s seat.   Jack closed the door and handed the papers and license back.

“Thank you for renting with A1.   We will see you back in a few days.” Jack said as he reached into the hut and pushed the button to open the gate.  Mr. Cramer was still shaking as he drove through and out on to the road.

[losolent]

Been waiting for the next chapter, love to know what happened to the castrated guy.

[chi4loads]

On 6/5/2018 at 4:17 PM, losolent said:

Been waiting for the next chapter, love to know what happened to the castrated guy.

That chapter wasn't too popular judging by the down votes and messages I got, so I wasn't going to take it further.

[JamieL95]

4 hours ago, chi4loads said:

That chapter wasn't too popular judging by the down votes and messages I got, so I wasn't going to take it further.

I would also love to hear more about that guy’s story. Maybe you could split it off into a different short story.

[tighthole64]

5 hours ago, chi4loads said:

That chapter wasn't too popular judging by the down votes and messages I got, so I wasn't going to take it further.

Personally I LOVED it!  Love the "Code 19!"  I guess as Im in customer service, I appreciated it.  Would LOVE to have a customer make the first move like in this chapter.  Personally, Id love to hear about the other reservations! 

[chi4loads]

On 6/11/2018 at 5:47 PM, Jamesleeee1 said:

I would also love to hear more about that guy’s story. Maybe you could split it off into a different short story.

 

On 6/11/2018 at 6:20 PM, tighthole64 said:

Personally I LOVED it! ...

 I'll think about it.  It could be a challenge.