@jagmanaz I'm really enjoying this hot story. In a sign of how much, I've already dropped several loads reading and re-reading it. In a throwback, I wish it was in paper form so that I could have spewed my jizz all over the pages and come back later to re-read it through the crusty, stiffened pages, being reminded of all the loads I dropped onto the page.
I like the introduction of Ivan and can sense that you're broadening the cast of characters to allow for a greater number of scenarios. Personally, I hope that, as you develop the story line, it delves into and includes a lot more kinks, moving beyond the typical focus on flooding holes, although I love that too. I really appreciated the fisting that Tom delivered earlier on. Also, his prior incarceration was novel, and added a sense of risk and roughness. I hope you dive into the main character's newly-positive status as way to explore those initial emotions of liberation and the accompanying rush.
Finally, I hope that you avoid substance use. That seems to be so entwined in gay life and sex that it overshadows that fucking bare is how men should always be fucking because it is natural to do so.