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How did I miss this story...? This has to be one of the all-time BZ classics. Nice narrative pace, sensitive writing, edgy without being in one's face. It certainly deserves to be brought to the surface again....

To repeat the wise words of others, tell the story as you want to tell it. It's difficult to imagine, but it's easier to write a lot and then trim it if you want. And so far, I don't see an excess of verbiage, and the pace is just right. In short, just keep doing what you've been doing, because the story is pretty hoT.

By chance, I read the story tonight. Jeezus F. Crisco, you don't often read a line like "I rode it like a 16 yr old cheerleader rides the qb of the football team." Hell yeah, we're drooling for the next installment just like the narrator is drooling over Ricky's dick....

5 hours ago, SlampaBay said:

Where can we find the earlier account of you and your nephew say the ABS? 

Go to "Your Last Load, the Backroom Edition" forum. The date of @Webster9's post is Nov. 29, 2021. It's pretty hot..... 

A little twist in the narrative to make me pay attention. And when I asked if the person at the door was "the friendly neighborhood dealer," it was a throwaway question. 

This story is insanely hoT and twisTed. Telling the story from the perspective of each character really works. Don’t leave us wondering who’s at the door… more parTy friends? The friendly neighborhood dealer?

Chapter 2 is as good as chapter 1. Thanks for putting in the time and effort to write.

I hope it is still open and I can get over there again soon.
 

Guys on Sniffies talk about being there, eager to take loads, etc. I’ve never been there. If you want to take a field trip sometime, shout. (My car isn’t anything to look at, but it can handle 275.)

9 minutes ago, JerseyPupHole said:

Oop. I usually try to avoid that combo even in fantasy; thanks for the public-service announcement and reminder!

Get down to Florida and you can really show your thanks….

Jeezus F. Crisco… if this story was any hotter, my computer would be a heap of molten metal and plastic.

(A cautionary note: G and alcohol do NOT go together. In real life, these 2 would be lucky to be alive. The story is still hot as hell…)

7 hours ago, ellentonboy said:

They are certainly up and running in Tampa/St. Pete Florida.....

My favorite postings:

"I AM HOSTING IN MY CAR". - huh?  (I am guilty I have done it once, and he was worth it).

 

I'm glad to see that I'm not the only one with that reaction to "I am hosting in my car." Admittedly, many vehicles on American streets are about the size of my living room so "hosting" in the car would be possible. 

11 hours ago, Orias59th said:

Almost 100% what I had with a thick tall bull with both sons playing D1 football! Also married but wife had absolutely no idea he was breeding me regularly.

The only way this could be hotter would be if his sons were also nailing your ass without their father knowing.

The likelihood of me ever getting to India is about the same as me becoming Governor of Florida. Though your comments are about Indian society, many of your observations, especially those about rural life, are applicable to American society. A serious thanks for taking the time and effort to write a very informative post.

7 hours ago, austin_submale said:

how to write in complete sentences...  And most of those seem to be on sniffies.

 

 

The inability to write complete sentences isn't limited to those under 30. Trawling the interwebs, I see profiles and posts from plenty of over-50 men whose concept of a sentence seems to be "county or state?" The format of Sniffies also doesn't lend itself to extended discussions. And who goes on Sniffies at 3 in the morning looking for conversation about the best approach for baking chicken...? Not I.

9 hours ago, Gingerguy said:

Is he everywhere?

As long as you remember him, he's everywhere you are..... When the monarch butterflies start to frequent the flowers and shrubs in the yard, I think of them as my late partner coming to check on me. You'll get to that point too.

23 hours ago, Joyboy813 said:

Let me save you the trouble, rainbow was shut down a year ago.  

When the original poster writes "Tampa Men's Club is the only bathhouse around the area now," one could reasonably infer that he knows Rainbow is -- and has been -- closed.

23 hours ago, Joyboy813 said:

When are you going to do another breeding party

Since the original poster hasn't been online here in over 10 years, you're not likely to get an answer from him anytime soon.

On 3/3/2023 at 10:30 PM, PERVERSATILE said:

"Memory and Imagination are the luxury goods of a minimum wage reality.'' -Skinny Pete 

I am so stealing that line.....

In a word, "yes." 

Disappointment was my reaction when at the Woods campground in northeastern Pennsylvania, I overheard two hot guys in leather discuss china patterns in voices that really didn't match the visuals.

On 11/12/2021 at 1:48 AM, BBArchangel said:

“Damn, I had avocados on the shopping list and forgot them.”  “I hope he finishes before my husband gets home.” “Is it daylight savings time already?”

The daylight savings time question is probably the most important....

4 hours ago, hntnhole said:

Wellllll .... he hasn't butchered millions quite yet - so maybe permanent retirement in a nice new home at RIKERS would suffice?  Or maybe that lovely retirement home in San Francisco  bay? 

Alcatraz has been closed for decades, and Rikers would only take NYC prisoners likely. He needs some place like Atlanta USP or Lewisburg USP or Leavenworth USP.

1 minute ago, BootyBlack415 said:

Damn.. Sorry About That. It was a very hot clip too.

It's hardly your fault. It's happened to tweets I've posted here, and it occasionally feels like a daily lottery at Twitter -- "which accounts should we suspend today even though they've been posting the same stuff for 3 years?" I've learned the art of downloading the videos I like just in case the Twitter gods sweep the accounts.

On 1/27/2023 at 3:58 AM, BootyBlack415 said:

Yeah, I made a really mess of this one. 

[think before following links] [think before following links] https://twitter.com/i/status/1618464378193432576

The guy's account is suspended.... damn...

At the risk of making my neighborhood more crowded, anyone thinking about Florida might want to consider the Tampa Bay area, especially St. Petersburg. The local politics is center-left; the city is working on the housing crunch for lower income folks; the city is neighborhood focused, especially in the older parts of the city. The place is pretty welcoming to LGBT folks, especially since the city knows that it was the LGBT folks who turned 2 neighborhoods around in the ‘90s. Yes, homeowner’s insurance is insane (a topic for another time), but I only have to worry about tropical storms and hurricanes. (If the house blows away, the dog and I will likely be playing the part of Dorothy and Toto.) Property taxes can be eye-watering, but you get reasonably good public services. There’s a sub-Reddit about St. Petersburg and a separate one about Tampa if anyone is inclined to look further.

Damn, none of my work conferences had side seminars like this....