Graduation Night

[seattlebbbtm]

I like this story because you are mixing in some pussy and that added element is extra hot

[Negasswhore]

Fuck rjb56 this is some super hot story you got going here!  I really hope you want to keep writing more of this, can´t wait to hear about how they get these boys crying hard to get more from them.

Thank you for the story!

[breedbaltimore]

So hot! had me rock hard and dripping precum!

[HighlyCurious]

I do hope you keep this story going. 

[Frenchpig]

amazing story, keep writing it's fucking hot

[sleazebugga]

fuck shot a good load over this

[nethingtwice]

No way. This cannot be your first story. It was perfect in every way. I just shot a massive load. Had to stop myself several times from cumming cause I wanted to make it til the end. Amazing job. Recommend you write more.

[rjb56]

Thank you for the feedback on my story. I assure you that it is my first shot at writing. I am writing a conclusion for this story and working out an idea for a new story. I really appreciate the comments, they get me excited about continuing to write.

[xtranicegayguy]

I agree, writing is outstanding, you develop the story in such away that if you experience some of the impacts/effects you say right away "oh so true, I know been there done that except never harder than poppers but would love to explore something harder to see what the impacts are yet not become addicted, been successful so far with not getting impacted by smoking or drinking....I could go into which ones but each person is different so it's not relevant here.....keep up the writing, impatient to see where you go with it......

[CABARE49]

I hope the next chapter comes soon.  This is really hot!

[rjb56]

I'm currently writing a new story called Austin, but I'm having a tough time finishing the story of Caleb and Paul. Anyone have any suggestions of what they'd like seeing happen to our two young former virgins.

[wnt2bslutty]

They need to get totally into it. As well as his girlfriend!

[Docebrown]

Excellent story. Blew two loads reading this first part. You have to continue to finish it.

[needpozzed]

They need to lose their innocence and become complete sluts begging for cock. Then... Enter the rugby team.

[redhotxxx]

Fuck!  That was a fantastic story!  Please keep writing.

 

They need to be trained until they completely surrender and become total cum sluts.