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Well, damn... chapter 22 was the perfect ending to a great story. Reading the soul-stirring and intensifying bond between Chris and Greg left me a bit misty-eyed. Thanks for this story, and I'm more than happy to wait for the next one. 

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1 hour ago, aj99 said:

Congratulations on concluding one of the best stories ever written in this forum.

I second that! Looking forward to whatever else you have in the pipeline, so to speak 🙂

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I've read each part more than once, and I've just spend a very gratifying time reading the whole thing in one go. Suffice it to say I have been ruining myself at the same time!

All the praise is definitely deserved. Not only do you make me feel like I'm there, you make me need to be there!

I think I can manage one more go...

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Standing ovation! Amazing story, intriguing characters, wonderfully written and kept the readers in the story! I felt like I was there, the word smithery was so perfectly descriptive! I am looking forward to your next story. BRAVO!

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On 12/23/2020 at 6:15 PM, wonderboy said:

Damn. Hot story.  Many hot stories are inspired by kinky minds but possibly because of the state of mind at the time of writing, they tend to lack good writing skills. All my posts are the example of those. However wheb I find story like this, where kink and good writing are combined. It's my mind explodes with lust. Ive re-read last chapter and now I am on my way to a guys house to live my own sexual fantasy. Thabks and please post more soon

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You've got it exactly. I write because I feel so much erotica and all porn is just "blah blah blah" sex....and on with bad writing and the same tired sex scenes.  I try to write a great story line but don't have the skill to pull it off and give the sexual content short shrift. This story is plausible, almost likely, well written AND so kinky hot I'm missing work to read it. Amazing work.

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Great ending! Great story! It’d be good see the boys hiv conversion if it’s possible😝 

Thank you for sharing your amazing story. Can’t wait to see the another! I’m a big fan yours.

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Excellent story, I wish I could get away with using that much, but I do have a life,  so fantasizing about it will have to do. Play Safe And sensible guys

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On 7/7/2021 at 8:04 PM, utbarebackbottom said:

Have you considered an epilogue?

Please!! That would be great! a quick hallway ran into, just to have a place to set them in my mind, hahaha. 

Well, your story, your characters , your choice.

I know everyone already told you this, but, it is true man @earlystart , one of the greatest stories I’ve read in 23 years of net surfing .

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thank you all so much for being this kind and generous. i write stuff that gets me off and writing for you guys has also made me include some things i havent experienced or thought a lot about before i got onto this site so thank you all for that too!

i think for now, im done with this story but i wanted you to know that i am working on another right now. the only thing is that i dont want it to feel like a been there done that story because i realize my two stories here and the one ive started are about young guys being started and broken in by older guys. writing teachers always say start with what you know right  :  )

i guess there are a few things that always get me off so thats probably why theyre always big parts of the stories. but i dont want you all to feel like im just writing the same story over and over again but with different names. so it will likely be a little more time before i feel ready to post chapter of the new story. working hard to get you off!

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