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Knightfalconer

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  1. Totally agree with this sentiment.
  2. Wish there were more tales of a leather / rubber clad top, taking control of a naïve / nervous younger neg guy. Seducing him with reassuring words and false promises to 'play safe, persuading his target to come over to the his place / lair for 'just a bit of fun'. Knowing that once he steps inside, the front door will be locked and the younger guy will be led to the bedroom. Soon, his foolishly trusting young victim, will be totally helpless , through the application of bondage straps; a gag; blindfold/mask etc. Even (if necessary), an injection of something to crush any remaining resistance within the younger guy, and replace those feelings with a deep hunger to get fucked...... ......fucked by the top's large, bare cock. Ultimately, the top blasts his poz seed deep into the younger guy's ravaged arse, and in doing so, claims his latest victim..
  3. Love tales involving some bondage and use of a gag.
  4. I attacked no one specific, so get back into your pram!. I don't have baggage.... unless travelling. Know what else I (all other gay men don't have....... A VAGINA!!!! (aka CUNT; PUSSY; TWAT; SNATCH; BEAVER; VULVA; CLIT; MUFF; MINGE etc. To refer to such during man on man sex, is meaningless (unless one of the men is undergoing surgery to 'change'... or as Victoria Wood (RIP) once described it: "Having the full conversion. You know... pipes re-laid....... all on-site rubbish removed!"
  5. It appears that my unprepped neg arse is just outside your age limit. Shame!

  6. I'd briefly used k whilst learning to take a fist for the first time, but then I stopped using it. Several years later, I dropped in on a FB mate whilst on my way home from work. He was in 'Tom of Finland' attire 😚 as he'd been playing earlier. We just chatted over a drink, but then my mate stood said he was tired and was going to bed for a few hours. He then said, that if I wanted to stay until he woke up, I was welcome to use the toys; lube; porn etc to 'entertain' myself. Before he went in to his bedroom, he added: "Oh, there's a ready made slam on the side, you're welcome to it if you want!" Whilst I was disappointed not to be playing with him, a slam in conjunction with the a toy and some porn, would make things enjoyable for me whilst on my own. Unfortunately, my FB had forgotten that he'd mixed k in with the slam. The result was I spent the next few hours, holding onto the sofa, wondering what the hell was happening. When my FB woke up, he realised instantly what had happened and was very apologetic. He made it up to me afterwards 😉, but I've avoided k ever since.
  7. A good story, I hope it continues? That said, I've played top/vers on the BDSM scene for over twenty five years now, yet I can't understand why some (mainly North American) authors, use the word 'faggot' in a story, as its so derogatory and negative. There are plenty of other words which can be used by a top, to display his dominance / control of a scene / over a sub guy, without needing to repeat such a pejorative and abusive term. Similarly, why make reference to 'pussy'; 'cunt'; 'clit' or even 'man-gina' etc? Man on man, gay sex doesn't need to be feminised in this way, unless a story has a specific TV/TS theme.
  8. mmmm can't wait for the next chapter.... especially as having used the toothbrush, Henning's arse will be 'fertile' for Florian's next deposit of poz seed.
  9. Shame that there isn't going to be another chapter, with Max fucking Danny again, (maybe restraining and gagging him because he's a bit reluctant this time). Then, just before Max blasts another toxic load into Danny's arse, Max reveals that he's impregnating Danny with poz seed!
  10. Sounds novel..... 🙂
  11. Wish something like that had happened to me when I was young and naive.
  12. A decade on, and is anyone still waiting for the next two chapters?
  13. Quite true. Besides, No 8 now needs find his first victim and begin a tally of his own, whilst Ross will invariably shift his focus on ensnaring No 9.
  14. I've been thinking about it, but realise there isn't much time left, in which to write it.
  15. I understand the point you are making, but should a middle aged driver still be penalised for being a bit of a speed freak when he was a teenager. I know someone who received had a clean driving licence for thirty years and then accumulated several speeding tickets in a very short period of time. The total was sufficient to have lost their licence (& their career), but a friend knew that the person's mother had died just before the tickets started accumulating, and too lose their licence, would make them even more depressed. Accordingly, they took some of the points and the person has not had a speeding ticket in the years since.
  16. I think this 'penalty points' system is reminiscent of being at school. It is quite churlish! It doesn't matter if the points can only be seen by the profile owner and the administrators. I'm sure anyone receiving points for doing something accidentally/unintentionally (like posting in the wrong area or using unacceptable language), bitterly resent being treated this way. We all make mistakes (even if its just pressing the wrong button on a keyboard) and a person is usually willing to forgive. That appears not to be the case on BZ where any transgression is penalised, whether clearly intentionally or not. Simply moving or (as necessary) deleting a post is surely quite sufficient in most cases. On any other site, your account would simply be suspended for a period (with the right of appeal because administrators do make mistakes). After several infractions & suspensions, you would be given a warning that your account will be deleted unless you adhered to the rules.
  17. Grundle?? WTF?? Even as a native speaker of British English, this was a new word for me. Never come across its usage (on a gay, medical or any other scene for that matter). Which is surprising, as when I looked it up in a dictionary, it said it was: slang for the perineum (the area of sensitive skin located between the genitals and the anus.
  18. A hot story. I love the inclusion of some bondage and a gag on the neg victim, I hope the next chapter will see these items continuing to be used... perhaps with an added hood or blindfold?
  19. 'The Ripper' - I think there's potentially a series of stories here..... each with a different victim!
  20. Totally agree. Its less complicated when there are only two people in the scene so a simple dialogue is like a game of tennis - batted back and forth. In such cases, only periodic additions of 'he said' or 'muttered Adam' are required. All I would add is an advisory to always place each character's lines on separate line from the other characters last statement. i.e. "You're hole is twitching with hunger isn't it?" demanded Chris. "Yes Sir, it is!" replied Phil. "What does it want boy?" As he asked this, Chris climbed on to the mattress and knelt between Phil's splayed and restrained legs. "It needs to feel your bare cock inside it please Sir" came the reply, accompanied by a wiggle of the arse. Well structured dialogue can enhance a scene by helping the tension to build, as well as slowing the inevitable temptation by an author, to rush towards penetration and orgasm.
  21. A very horny story indeed, with a deep connection between the gifter and recipient. Personally, the fem/jewellery aspect turned me off (but its clearly something the author enjoys). My only small criticism is that if they guys were not suppose to reveal their names to each other, then Stuart would have waited until they were alone in the bedroom before asking Andy what his name was.
  22. Sadly, yet another story with a hot start, great potential... then everything goes limp!
  23. Two more examples (slightly out of date now though): 'Gatorade' is a brand of sports/energy drink (popular in the US), often referred to in these stories. Despite its introduction into the UK in 2008, its still far less well known (I'd never heard of it until joining this website), or widely available here. People of an older generation are more likely to refer to 'Lucozade', whilst younger generations will probably refer to 'Red Bull' or 'Monster'. In the latter half of the 20th Century, 'Durex' was (& remains), a well known brand of condoms in the UK, but at the same time in Australia, it was a brand of adhesive tape! The tape is no longer produced under this name due to a growing awareness of its connection to a type of contraceptive.
  24. This is a well written and realistically convincing bit of conversation between a poz stealther and his latest victim.
  25. Sadly, the author of this erotic tale hasn't logging in since Nov 2022. So a fifth chapter is unlikely to get posted. :-(
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