RawSubDad
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It has potential but that chapter was so brief I was just beginning to get hard and fish my dick out for a rub when it ended...☹️
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I'm game to read more.
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A great story even for an accomplished writer and it's even more impressive as a first time storyteller on BZ.
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You gave yourself the opportunity to more fully tell this story by writing a prequel so we can get some erotic details about our top and how and when he was pozzed, his age and more about the Christian. Alternatively, the sky's the limit for how the story progresses. I vote for more.
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Solid effort and it got me off fantasizing about being pozzed.
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Escorting through the 1990s ... bareback!
RawSubDad replied to Tanbbottom's topic in Bug Chasing & Gift Giving FICTION
Now those boys just need more opportunities to play safe but then fail to do so. -
Fertile, shooting blanks or do-not-care?
RawSubDad replied to bbboyfucker's topic in HIV/AIDS & Sexual Health Issues
My issue on this topic has to do with getting pregnant. The doctors all say it's impossible but I'm not so sure, so I keep trying. I suppose one day I may accept "scientifically based facts", but not today. -
I see some chems in Jake's & Jamal's future. Great start.
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It seems like we may learn how far the fall is pretty soon and I can't wait.
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I hope you have more writing planned. You're off to a great start.
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If it's a failing it's insignificant in light of all you and your stories have to offer. If I sounded ungrateful I'm not but if I'm being honest, when I'm jerking (and why I'm reading BZ stories, I'm either jerkin off or looking for a story that will get the job done 😈), it's difficult to get going with the short chapters. I love your writing.
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There's always someone bitching about something so it might as well be me this morning: You got a little stingy with the word count for that chapter, don't you think? I do love the story though.
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The main thrust of your story is pretty complete or at least at a good pausing (& pozzing) point. I definitely think the coach is the way to go. Having been just pozzed (during his first time on the bottom?) he's going to want to reclaim some power. Maybe he talks the boy into visiting his old school and talk to the wrestlers for motivation and to help coach identify his victims and then lure in some boys for The Boss to make his slaves?
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Great start and you just ended my hour-long edging session 🍆💦
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We definitely need to hear how the apprentice handles himself.
