Son is victim of Black revenge

[tightwranglers]

Moderator's Note: "Race Play" is a thing. It's fine as a fantasy in fictional stories. It's NOT OK in real life unless both people are into it.

FIRST TIME STORY. Its fiction so be kind in your critique. 

 

The nigger texted my dad.  Jack make yourself free and give me a call. 

Jack excused himself, said he needed to run an errand and left his wife at the dinner table.

A groveling masculine voice answered. The nigger told my dad, I know you can tell by voice I’m not some sissy white man, but a big dick nigger.  I’m sending you a pic to your phone. Look at it.   Any guesses what that is, yeah it’s my big dick breaching the hole of a hairy white man’s ass.

Try and keep your dick in your pants, that poor white hole is your son’s. Yeah, I’ve been tracking him for a while. Knew he was the son of yours, knew you hated us niggers, thought nothing funnier that ruining his hole with nigger dick and knocking him up with so much nigger seed you’ll be having black grand babies for years.

You should have told him that wearing tight wranglers only makes that fat ass he inherited from you even more tempting. Wasn’t’ hard to get a bunch of my buddies to want to fuck him after I showed them pics. Even more wanted to join after I told him his daddy was a nigger hating cop.

Was easy to get him back to my basement. Dumb kid thinks with his dick, goes to the bookstore to get his dick sucked through the gloryholes once a week. He really should have made sure the door was locked. Was easy for Vince to get into the booth.  Kids pants were already down to his boots, and ass exposed. Vince says he was shocked when he saw this rough faced black beast come into his booth. And even more shocked when he felt Vince lean into his back and force Josh’s cock deeper into the mouth on the other side of the gloryhole. Kid was distracted by the deep throating long enough to not notice Vince grabbing a shard form his pocket and see him spit on his finger. but he certainly didn’t miss that shard being shove roughly up his hole.  Apparently dumb bitch tried to buck Vince away at that point. Once that shit was absorbed it was easy to manipulate him. Pulled his jeans back up and drove him in his pretty new truck back to my place.

Whore was glassy eyed by the time we got him inside. Feeling so euphoric he didn’t question anything just followed 5 dark brothers into my dingy basement. He sat like a little obedient bitch on that ratty couch between two buddies. They just got smirks on their faces and ripped his shirt off, pulled his boots off, yanked his jeans off too. Kid must have a jock fetish cause he was wearing a grey jock. We did care about his dick so we left that on. I told my boys to put his cowboy boots back on him. I wanted to rest them on my shoulder next to my face. I wanted him to think of me every time he wore his boots, Think of the bull nigger that tore up his hole, raped him raw, breed him deep and knocked up him. You should have seen that pretty light hole swallow my cock. Ill give it to him he grunted and took the pain like a man. Once I had opened up him a little bit I grabbed my tina laced lube and coated my cock and plunged back into that bitch. I wanted him so high that he would associate new levels of pleasure with being filled by black cock. He took to his like fish to water the tina had him moaning in no time.

Funny thing is your bitch son might be gay but he certainly doesn’t get fucked a lot, when I blew my charged up load into that hole and pulled out it was pink with blood. I literally tore him up. We all got a good laugh at that. My boys know I don’t shoot blanks, my loads been strong as shit ever since the meds got too expensive.

After I dropped my nut it was a free for all. Nobody wasted their time with his mouth. All of us can get BJ anytime, we wanted some redneck ass. By the way, a good nigger always nuts in a hole, we spread our seed. Your boy took 12 loads last night.

Now look closer at the pic. Notice how red and puffy that hole is, that’s what a bunch of big dicks will do over a few hours to a hole. We cunted your boy. Boy must be sore, and you must be eager to get us to stop using your son. Here is the deal.  We know how much you hate niggers let alone fags, so you need to meet us at the preserve in 15 minutes. That is if you don’t want your cop buddies and fire department friends to see this shit. Don’t worry we won’t touch you, we just want to see your face as we defile your kid one last time.

[drscorpio]

Your writing is fine as far as writing a sex story goes. I am a little disturbed by the racist theme. 

 

One critique is it is hard to tell whose point of view you are using. The first sentence says "my dad" which makes you think this is all from the son's point of view. Then the rest of it seems to be from the kidnapper's viewpoint. I assume Jack is the father's name. 

[Pigmut]

WOW!! What great story. 

[Guest jason385]

I love having a shard in my ass then getting fucked. Nothing better, especially if it's a BBC.

[jdsf88]

Excellent, this may just get me through shelter in place.

[timfreo]

So fucking HOT!!! Talk about every neg fags fantasy ❤️❤️❤️

[Pigtoy]

Love it.  My fantasy is very similar 

[shinelover]

I've only been with one guy who insisted I use the 'N' word with him. It took a lot of convincing to get me to do it for him, but he got off on it the way I get off on guys calling me 'faggot' while they're pounding me.

So I do find this story hot, and can't wait to read what happens next!

[TustinBB]

Damn this is HOT!

I can't wait for the next update. 

[roguechoirboi]

On 4/18/2020 at 12:50 PM, drscorpio said:

Your writing is fine as far as writing a sex story goes. I am a little disturbed by the racist theme. 

 

One critique is it is hard to tell whose point of view you are using. The first sentence says "my dad" which makes you think this is all from the son's point of view. Then the rest of it seems to be from the kidnapper's viewpoint. I assume Jack is the father's name. 

I agree with this, but definitely enjoy interracial play. The power dynamic is especially hot, to flip the script on the dad and his buddies. "Look, Daddy! Look how much I like this!"

It would be hot if the meeting ends up with dad and his buddies using the son's mouth. Personally? I work extra hard for everyone if I'm taking it, blissed out, at both ends.

Thank you for posting this! 🙂

Great beginning! 🙂 

[bbbhlover]

Hello! Is there any chance this story will get an update?

[7bb86]

Please write more oink

[Toxload]

Fantastic story 

would love it to keep going and have the brothers breed him as he's sick with the fuk flu

turn him into a breeder 

[denVERScub]

Your writing style and creative plot made this story jump off the page, grab my cock and ignite a fire in my body that got hot enough to spontaneously cum-bust. I'm not sure if I'd be happy if I was the son or of I'd be horrifled by what took place in the story but I'm so turned on that I'm willing to be the guinea pig and let those massive black penises destroy me so I can find out! I hope you write more. 

P.S. if you are done with this tale, I would love to write a cumpanion story following the son, his bigot father, and what fucked up shit he did to this vengeful pissed off black man that led to that fateful night & what happened after...

[ffoz]

i'm in Australia. finding the 'N' word offensive.