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RawSubDad

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  1. Fantastic fantasy and the kind of fun that drives this 57 year old to hit up 18 & 19 year olds and offering my dedicated service and worshiping.
  2. Love it so far. I'm looking forward to seeing how our main character learns he taking poz loads b
  3. Thanks for the explanation.
  4. That's one intense story. Please keep telling it.
  5. While reading stories in various content areas, I regularly, though not frequently, see the parenthetical (banned word) apparently substituted for a word or words originally in the story but removed presumably either by the author or a moderator. I searched the site but came up empty handed. I feel like I'm not in on the joke while also concerned I'll use one or more banned word and get in trouble. Are some words banned and who decided that was appropriate?
  6. This is a great second chapter follow-up and I almost missed it. I think the timing of your post on Christmas Eve must have caused most BZ members to miss it. Please don't let this influence you about your abilities and about the quality of this story. I desperately hope you will write more chapters in young Alex's search for success in the art world.
  7. Lucky boy, about to get pozzed on his first time with a guy.
  8. I'm a couple loads into this story and I'm confident you'll get me one more at least
  9. Absolutely love it and I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it.
  10. I wondered the same thing and went back a page to check if missed content that set up the boy's slam. Like poor grammar and spelling, the truly challenged writers often lose their way in a story or sometimes they just lose a chapter or two. Many don't even know what they did until the praise they crave was replaced with a question from another member looking for clarification. DaddyBear, you'll probably survive this character assassination. Stay strong!
  11. I assumed it was a technical issue along those lines. The story is written too well for that type of error to repeat like it does. I really like the story though.
  12. Love the story. Maybe you could edit it to change master chef to master chief?
  13. I can tell you that I just shot a load of my pathetic neg cum
  14. This is one of the rare father/son stories that can get me off. Keep them and us cumming.
  15. Great story and it's told well. I'm one big load in with another long edging session started.
  16. Very nice, creative writing. The original author could certainly turn an erotic phrase to fit the storyline. I hope there's more.
  17. I'm looking forward to learning just how Jacob gets his cherry popped.
  18. Fuck yes. I hope you have several chapters of pozzing debauchery in your head and soon posted here.
  19. Great start. Keep it (and me) cumming😈
  20. Great story and thanks for sharing.
  21. That's ridiculous. Six loads is six loads regardless of how engaged the bottom is.
  22. I shot 3 loads reading that story
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