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very hot. 

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You ruin the story when you add pictures.  Leave pictures out of it.. let the reader enjoy the story and use their imagination..  

 

story wasn’t even worth a read anymore..  just a shame.. it looked like it could’ve been good.. but ruined with pics.

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On 6/19/2022 at 5:55 AM, ottawabi said:

You ruin the story when you add pictures.  Leave pictures out of it.. let the reader enjoy the story and use their imagination..  

 

story wasn’t even worth a read anymore..  just a shame.. it looked like it could’ve been good.. but ruined with pics.

Wow, that not only is rude, but I TOTALLY disagree. But here is the real thing- how many stories have YOU written and put up on here for everyone to read? Zero?  Denver is taking the time and effort to contribute something for our enjoyment. So you do not like the story, or the addition of pictures- read someone elses contribution that you find stimulating- or again, better yet- put up or shut up.  What your post may well have done is deter someone else from submitting a story or rough draft of an idea they have. Yeah, some of the writers who put up stories for us to enjoy have typo's or syntax errors-- but I appreciate ( and I would venture to say a lot of the other men on here do as well) the effort and attempt.

To DenverHandyMan- I have been enjoying the story and DO hope you will continue producing chapters for us. I am anxious and eager to see where you , Phil ,Tyler, and who knows  who else ( the entire baseball team??LOL)  end up in this plot.  THANK YOU for the time and effort- and please, feed me another chapter- I need to bust another load out ! 

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DenverHandyMan, this is one of the best stories on here, and your added pictures make it even hotter. I hope, as I'm sure other members do as well, that you will continue this incredibly hot story. 

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The pictures are fine; some of us appreciate an aid to our imaginations, and any of the young gentlemen in the photos could assist me anytime. The story has some interesting plot twists which make me pay attention and stimulate my twisted imagination. And if a couple of guys in my dorm were like these two, I’d be working on my 10th bachelor’s degree (or something like that). Writing is not an intrinsically easy task; to do it well, including staying away from the too familiar plots we see in porn, takes no small amount of time and effort. @DenverHandyMan, thanks for putting in that time and effort. And if you leave this story in mid-air, I’ll organize the posse to haul your ass to a writing desk for you to finish it.