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lookinaround13

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  1. Fuck. This story is so hot. I can’t believe I hadn’t read it before!
  2. Such a hot story. Surely a classic for on here
  3. Just re-read this story. So hot. Wish there was more
  4. I’m glad people are encouraging caution. If you become poz, you can’t change your mind. Fantasies are fun & get us off, but they aren’t necessarily the only important thing in life. Also, I only mention this because it is rarely mentioned on here, but are you in therapy or suchlike at all? I personally think therapy is helpful for almost anyone, so I’m not suggesting it as a “chasing is bad & you need cured.” I just suggest it as a possibility because you did mention getting out of a relationship & its been a rough year for most. I hope whatever you decide, you make the best decision for yourself.
  5. Sexy story! I hope you continue with more. Wish I had a boyfriend like that in school... or now
  6. Congrats! I hope you like stepping back in to porn. Def hope you do bareback again. It’s def the stuff I watch 98% of the time and the only stuff I ever guy or subscribe for.
  7. Since my simple suggestion / concern is not liked on this story, I am taking myself out of the equation. I’m sorry I said anything. I would have been okay with a “no” from the author. I was simply commenting. I hope chi4loada continues the story however he wants. I really only asked for a warning if he went back to a storyline I thought I and others were less interested in. I am fine that asking for a warning is displeasing to everyone concerned. I thought I wasn’t the only one who didn’t like that particular storyline. It was not meant to be heated or cause one to give up writing entirely. I was only trying to explain myself. I did say that I like 99% of this story. I forgot that this particular forum is not always a place for criticism, even though I originally stated I wasn’t opposed to the storyline continuing, simply asking for a brief mention when it would be continued so I could chose to skip that chapter or skim it instead. I’m sorry that caused an uproar. I’m actually strictly opposed to censorship in fiction, as I have read things on nifty that would prove unpopular in the mainstream. Once again, I am sorry a simple request turned into someone delaying or putting their work on hiatus. As an author I’m used to much stricter, specific, and harsher criticism from those who don’t write and have an opinion, peers, and people I consider much better writers than I. I should have realized this is not a place for criticism, even of the gentlest variety. I did get a bit specific in my trying to explain my position in asking for a warning. All apologies. It won’t happen from now on.
  8. You don’t think castrating someone and physically removing parts of their actual manhood due to verbal bullying is ridiculous to ask for warning. I realize there’s a certain level of fantasy to this site, but that was beyond the point of normal revenge. People have committed suicide for less invasiveness. I have had many people verbally abuse me (a group of guys kept calling my friend and I “faggots” while we were walking from his apartment building to his pool, which is not a far distance, but felt like a long walk from our perspective) and yet I’m not actually wanting to chase them down and remove their literal balls. I realize that, even then, fantasy is hardly helpful to the situation at large. I actually struggle with reading things on here that OFTEN skirt the line with consent, to the point that I wonder if most people on this site advocate rape (and murder) to other men (gay or straight) to some respect. I also realize that (I hope) some of these stories are probably psychologically helpful in getting through things that are obviously hard to speak about in normal contexts. Yet I have accidentally read enough rape/death fiction on here that is quite detailed and honestly freaks me out. I might add these stories I stumble into haven’t been marked well. I was just asking for a storyline I don’t appreciate (though haven’t explicitly said is wrong to write or read about entirely) is simply pointed out so I might skip that chapter. It’s too real. It breaks my willing suspension of disbelief. I don’t think asking for a simple disclaimer is really that rude.
  9. Cool hot new chapters. If you decide to continue with the castration / mutilation storyline, can you give fair warning before whatever chapter it might be in? It’s a big mood killer and I find it disturbing. Not judging, I just don’t think it’s something anyone deserves and freaks me out personally. Thanks! I do enjoy 99% of your writing, so the above really isn’t meant as a diss.
  10. It was so fun to read about the twins again. I wonder if any other characters will pop up from other stories. Jake was such a familiar name! ? just keep going! As long as it’s fun and hot and full of breeding and doesn’t become death focused,
  11. Hot final chapter. I guess in reading it a few times I never got that Matt and Ben were completely unaware of being pozzed/ pozzing others, but that kinda works as a twist. Interested in the new story / spin-off.
  12. I have to agree with drscorpio. Forced sex slavery, especially by fam, has me a bit disinterested in the story. Sorry. ?
  13. These have been your hottest chapters yet! I hope Coach Adams and the seniors get to play. Maybe involve some of our main cast. ?
  14. So glad you brought back the swim club! :-) All the chapters are great though.
  15. I love this story and I really like how you keep adding to the cast. Especially like the younger almost graduated and college guys and incest. Hope you eventually go back to Ric and his friends or maybe do a spin off of all of them in college.
  16. I hope someday we get an ending to this. Always a great one to re-read
  17. Read this whole story again. I hope it gets finished some day. Such a good piece
  18. Really enjoying this story again lately. I was a bit turned off after the vengeance, mutilation, plot line from a few chapters back. Just don't get into that level of violence and it breaks the fantasy for me. Other than that chapter, I really love the story and how many characters and plots you've introduced. I hope you don't mind the constructive criticism. I mean no disrespect and understand that some people enjoy that level of darkness on here. I'm just glad it's more consensual. I just think that's hotter and not overly common in here.
  19. I don't want this story to end! I say go back to the twins or new characters in the same universe so we can see some of the guys pop up again
  20. I hope the lax player appears again too!
  21. Just stumbled upon this story. It was going great! Very hot! I hope you continue!
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