A Brother in Trouble

[chi4loads]

Thanks for the comments.  I appreciate it.

 

4 hours ago, negchaserlooking said:

Thank you for the stories. I hope you give consideration to writing more some time in the future

I had already started writing other stories. Other than editing, this last chapter was finished almost a month ago.  Now I just have to find some place to post them that respects their contributor's work.

[tinkerblizz]

Thank you for writing the story was very well written and a very good ending. hope that you do right more writing not just for this story but make other ones as well.

[barebackrnb]

An awesome conclusion to a great story!  It doesn't seem like it's been 100 chapters (probably seems more than that to chi4loads... 😉).  Developing new characters while maintaining current ones is a difficult task, but chi4loads has met this task with outstanding ease.  I venture to say that Brother in Trouble will remain a popular thread on BZ for years to come for new comers and BZ regulars alike.

We all need to thank chi4loads for not sharing this story line, but also his writing skills.  Thank you, chi4loads! 😘

[Cdexter]

Thank you

[2bit]

Thank you. This masterwork has kept me coming back for more and more. I hope you reconsider future submissions (you are a fantastic storyteller) but understand if you don’t. All the best. 

[FFistFetish]

Thanks so much for all the hard work you put into giving us this masterpiece.

[negchaserlooking]

On 5/25/2019 at 3:02 AM, chi4loads said:

Thanks for the comments.  I appreciate it.

 

I had already started writing other stories. Other than editing, this last chapter was finished almost a month ago.  Now I just have to find some place to post them that respects their contributor's work.

Great. Please keep your followers up to date 

[brianinsf]

Thanks for the amazing story. I’m going to miss the characters 

[AnonPerv]

This is so fucking hot! 

[Guest]

One hot fucking story,  Have no idea how many loads I shot.  If this was on audible it would be number 1!!

[barecubtop]

Ditto to the other comments...thank you for your writing.  I finally caught up with the last several chapters while riding home from a vacation.  Bravo!

[DutchBBfucker]

hot story

 

[BareboyQ]

Thanks Chi4loads, i loved every single chapter and was shooting countless loads while reading them!

[Menbendovr]

Fantastic story Chi4loads!  I look forward to your next new story or stories.

[hrbigbelly]

Thanks for the great story.  I never had so many boners and cum shots from reading a hot story online from reading this story online.